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  1. MasterY001

    Offering a free cover for my debut post!

    For now just read Act 0 or Act 1 because I'm reformatting at the moment Will you accept references as well? Because lot of my characters already have designs
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    Soo hi?

    I'm saving this. And hello, new person
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    Why is there no Anime Art?

    I draw my own anime art, but I'm not very good since I'm self-taught. I guess the main reason there aren't any on SH is because of specialization. Writers like to write, artists like to art draw, and there aren't many who just happen to like doing both.
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    Lowest K/D ratio

    Sireli: 0/4 Twice against religious fanatics, once against a girl with superpowers who never shuts up, and once against her angry boyfriend. Also, she's dead.
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    Do you consider yourself to be a likable person?

    1. Yes, but only in small doses. I'm very high energy in real life. Like a real-life cartoon character. 2. Hell yeah. It took time, but I learned to have confidence in myself. Self-care goes a long way too. So, get off your chairs and take a shower. 3. Of course, it is. Bottom line, it feels...
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    Writing I just wrote the chapter 2. did i become better?

    Well, I would try to give a little background when new locations or people are revealed. Pretend you're a tour guide being asked questions like: "Where did that come from?" "What happened in this place?" "Who is that and why are they important?" Explain or hint at how things are connected in...
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    Writing I just wrote the chapter 2. did i become better?

    Your writing style improved from Chapter 1, hands down, but it still needs work. If you separate the dialogue from narration and use smaller text blocks, it'll be more readable. Also, for fuck's sake, lose the censorship. My main concern is with your lack of concrete exposition or...
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    Exploring your villains...

    So... Parker Selfridge from Avatar, Nolan's Joker, and... IDK, Sid from Toy Story? Uh, do you need a hug?
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    "Join?" Ha! I think you mean "conquer!!"

    "Join?" Ha! I think you mean "conquer!!"
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    Tell that to Tom Hardy's Venom. Eat brains in the name of justice.

    Tell that to Tom Hardy's Venom. Eat brains in the name of justice.
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    Exploring your villains...

    My main villain is a super-genius manipulator from the slums. Since no one took him seriously, he climbed the political ladder out of spite. His goal is absolute control at any cost. I'm trying to explore two connected ideas: unrecognized talent and vengeful ambition. Deep down, everyone wants...
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    What is the most powerful thing in all of fiction?

    I just flashed back to Jar-Jar Binks
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    At what point do your characters begin to take over the story?

    IMO, it's less about not having a plan and more about not following it to the letter. Even if you know the plot you want to write, how it plays out may be less predefined.
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    At what point do your characters begin to take over the story?

    Similar situation with me. It's even better when you have an ensemble cast with many protagonists because then you can see how different characters react to the same situation.
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    Seeking fellow writers to brainstorm and exchange ideas on MMORPG-themed stories!

    Screw it. I come in, try to be helpful, and I get ghosted. Oh well. I dunno. Turn the planet into a cube? It's 5 AM
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    Seeking fellow writers to brainstorm and exchange ideas on MMORPG-themed stories!

    It's just out of place, that's all. Lots of scams start like that
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    Seeking fellow writers to brainstorm and exchange ideas on MMORPG-themed stories!

    Then you text them. Because my spider sense tells me this is a scam. Whoever this is, there isn't a chapter in their profile. "Fellow writer" my fellow ass
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    Seeking fellow writers to brainstorm and exchange ideas on MMORPG-themed stories!

    BTW, did some recon. You haven't written anything here before. I feel like this is just some kinda scam... Thanks, I guess... So, 7 letters is too long for the internet now? Whoop-de-damn-do
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