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You're wrong about spears being bad in duels. Spears with shields crushes swords in basically any format thanks to the combination of protection and reach.

Not legally. Morally? To you it's justified, but not to the murdered and their associates.

Context clues from the literal opening post should tell you why you should not be surprised.

Oh right, how could I have missed that.

Similar, medieval battles aren't constantly fighting on a personal level. You engage, you retreat, you rally, you engage. Across the entire battlefield multiple flanks are doing the same thing so there's constant fighting, but it's unreasonable to expect a peasant, or even a trained warrior, to...

zzzzzzz Except this entire thread is outlining the challenges of maintaining your own morality while still changing the world. As long as the problem can't be solved with pure force, OP is meaningless except for basic power projection and the inability to be assassinated. You still have to...

Don't write the mob. Write high-class rich people, businessmen, who happens to have illegal assets to do their bidding. So write them as you would write an aristocrat, and then draw attention to their connection to the underworld.

The mechs is above ground, initially in the air, before falling back to ground after taking some damage and continuing there. The thickness of the concrete is constant (1-2 meters, whichever is more realistic), while the dirt and stone is variable. I would like them to be able to just barely...

Like a couple of 10 meter tall mechs smacking each other around with appropriately sized weapons. Or large tank-sized rifle rounds hitting the ground when missing. Upper layer is dirt, stone, and finally like two meters of concrete around the tunnel itself. Could you feel the battle if the...

Everyone is subject to this limitation, so he could just optimize his visibility.

You may be overusing genres tbh. Genre is something overarching. Consider shifting some of them to tags Romance -> Romantic Subplot etc Edit: You have Mature, Adult, Smut, and Ecchi. You have four genres dedicated to its pornographic qualities. Maybe just condense them down to Adult and Smut...

Teamwork: " Someone saves them " honestly.

I consider negotiation and seduction "deal with the opponent" as in making a deal. There's no way out. Your character is screwed. Fatality

I firmly believe that it is my GL tag that made my story even mildly successful by any standards. Even then I have never hit trending. This means that in any other platform I'd flunk and be obscure.

I never realized this before now, but my characters are much more mature now. I still set their age young because it's what I did before, but gradually, their mental age increased.

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This is most novels. Something with an adventure happening in the foreground with romance as a side-dish. But people like to stack tags and genres, so they put the romance as a genre despite it being a mislabel. (Guilty of this)

I'm assuming that all of you who chose "the Divine Tales" enjoy the Sound and the Fury? That book is pretty much the epitome of: Report after back after you'd read it, and be careful what you wish for. And if you did like it, congratulations.

A link would be really helpful. Also, that title though. It's kind of plain, like it doesn't really tell me much...