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My general feeling is that every paragraph in a story should "pay rent", i.e. contain something interesting, important, or delightful enough to justify the space it takes up in the story. I personally love dialogue so much that I have a bad habit of ignoring the physical descriptions of...

Since you seem to somehow still be keeping up with your generous offer of reviewing first chapters after two months (!!!!), I shall take advantage of your kind offer and ask for feedback on the first chapter of my "Superhero harem mystery with the most reliable narrator you'll ever meet"...