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I dont mind time skips if nothing happens during that period or the MC goes on training arc 1 or 2 chapters showing them working then a skip is fine imo. We really dont need to see all that

Self loathing

Can someone explain the hype for.hollow knight to me? Is it really that good because the gameplay looks meh...

Looking forward to day 200 where you draw an absolute masterpiece. Also once you learn to draw you will be faced with an important decision

If you wanna make money off your work then start a patreon. You wont get as much initially but if your story is popular then im sure over time the income will come. Losing the rights to.your work is never worth it ever. No matter how much money it is

Just ignore them i get thease messages quite frequently

Only good option

Its a clanker what do you expect?

My strengths . I think my dialogue is pretty good and flows naturally. . I think my world building is okay. .Smut Weakness Pacing Action scenes

I think you handled the transition well. This is my opinion I feel like this part is too much. I like concision. Less is more approach. I feel like you could get rid of half of this and still achieve the same effect. But this is me. It is perfectly fine as it is.

TAU mentioned.....

Does it involve cake?

1. Pov affects how a story or moment is received. For example, romance and personality moments, imo, are better in the first than 3rd. Whilst action sequences are a lot clearer to follow in 3rd person. However, this isn't an iron-clad rule; there are exceptions, and you can use either in any...

The ability to torsion anything

My dialogue is shit but holy crap its not this bad. There are smut writers on this site that write better dialogue than this

This but listening to anything made by scattle

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