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  1. Alkareel

    Yellow frog wanna ask something.

    Have you guys ever tried posting 2 of the same titles together on this site? Where one is the original and the second is in a rewritten form? In my case, for example, I started Erden with no knowledge and experience with writing. I'm planning to do rewrites for it, and have started. Is it...
  2. Alkareel

    Feed my back, please.

    So someone said it lacked a bit of tension, so I tried adding some. Does the added bit blend in well, and does it give off a bit of tension?
  3. Alkareel

    Yay, I'm up to 10 parts!

    Well, the celebration's up to you! If you fell like it's worth it, then it is! :blobtaco: :blobtaco:
  4. Alkareel

    What words you always misspell?

    Ocassional occasional ocasional oca ok oppaaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiii!
  5. Alkareel

    A Will Eternal Anime

    Yes. It's anime. Not the 3d game animation that Tencent is known for. This thread will be me giving a review(rant cause I'm drunk) about it. Damn. I love the art. The voice actors did good. Pacing? Decent, I guess. Not jarring like most chinese animation. At least, not until the Northern vs...
  6. Alkareel

    Feed my back, please.

    Ohhh, thank you thank you. I'll see what I can do. :blob_cookie:? Here is a cookie~
  7. Alkareel

    Feed my back, please.

    Thank you very much for your input! A lot of things will happen though so there will be other moments. For your 1st point, it's someone's manner of speech. 2nd point, I agree. It does feel a bit stiff. 3rd It's the first mention of his name, so I tried slipping the full thing in *wink for the...
  8. Alkareel

    A few questions

    Per day yeah, I can manage. The most I can do in one day would be a little over 2000 words. But then I spend the next day proofreading and rewriting it for better reading. (Not the whole day of course. Just the time I spend writing.) I'm amazed that she can write 3000 words a day.
  9. Alkareel

    Feed my back, please.

    A little over 1200 words. I plan on maybe doing some rewrites on Land of Erden. Below being the first chapter, does it keep your interest till the end? D'you think it could work? I humbly ask for a bit of criticism. - Age Ten – Urie Loeth - —It's tomorrow. Tomorrow. Finally, it's...
  10. Alkareel

    Gato~ :blob_melt:

    Gato~ :blob_melt:
  11. Alkareel

    Chapter comments with gif

    Imagine getting small, irregular delays as you scroll down while reading. Won't that break your immersion? I've experienced this before on previous sites with GIF advertisements and I tell ya, either I try to look for a complete Epub or I lose interest altogether.
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    Chapter comments with gif

    Won't this cause lag?
  13. Alkareel

    Have you fallen in (romantic) love before?

    I liked this girl I've known for two weeks. (Before covid story) We literally spent 60-70% of the full hours of that time chatting online. We even went out a couple of times. I was so smitten with her, it was the first I've felt so much for someone. Sometime after the first three days, I had...
  14. Alkareel

    Unpopular opinion on harems

    I'm tired of nonsensical harems where girls thirsty for the mc just keep nonsensically adding to the group. Take Arifureta for example. I loved how it began, but felt disgusted with how girls kept getting introduced into his group. I had enough when a whole chapter consisted of nothing but...
  15. Alkareel

    :blob_aww: Thanks for the caats~

    :blob_aww: Thanks for the caats~
  16. Alkareel

    A few questions

    Waaah, how many words d'you guys have on a single chapter? I humble myself before you.
  17. Alkareel

    Looking For Something to Read

    Stellar transformation is in present tense I think. You could try that.
  18. Alkareel

    frog is dope huhuhu. :blob_teehee:

    frog is dope huhuhu. :blob_teehee:
  19. Alkareel

    Hardcore leveling warrior @Agentt

    Hardcore leveling warrior @Agentt
  20. Alkareel

    Recommendations Give me anything!

    Insert Self Promotion Here JLN Isekai -Hai to Gensou no Grimgar -Otomega -To be a power in the shadows - Sendai Yuusha -Goblin Kingdom -Skeleton Knight in another world -The new gate -Overlord -Slime Tensei -Kumo Desu ga -shield hero and mushoku tensei for Wuxia just go to wuxiaworld and look at...
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