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  1. OatMush

    Tell me about the theme of your story!

    Losing your support network
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    What happens if we beat the game in under an hour?

    What happens if we beat the game in under an hour?
  3. OatMush

    Condoms that aren't his size :blob_evil_two:

    Condoms that aren't his size :blob_evil_two:
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    Trying too hard not to copy Tolkien

    I generally don't care, but I think a lot of fantasy world building is pretty boring anyway, so mixing it up can be fun. Elves especially I think are pretty dull, they're just humans but better in everyway
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    I don't know what that is but I'm very sorry for your loss :(

    I don't know what that is but I'm very sorry for your loss :(
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    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    Hello! I'm not sure about stories in similar genre, but I'll do my best to give some constructive criticism for you! Today I was in a mood to read, and I quite enjoyed your story, so I read more than I usually do. I read until chapter 6 and stopped here: The room around us felt alive with...
  7. OatMush

    cute~

    cute~
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    What are you printing?

    What are you printing?
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    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    No worries! Let's go! Alrighty! Read until end of chapter 2! I like it! 5* and added to reading list. What I liked: Your writing! It's easy to follow what's happening and I like when stories immediately give a good idea of what the MC is like. I think you have the right balance of...
  10. OatMush

    mirrors...

    mirrors...
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    uhh dunno? depends on what else is happening and the character I guess. Personally I've never...

    uhh dunno? depends on what else is happening and the character I guess. Personally I've never encountered asking someone if they want to go further a turn off
  12. OatMush

    ah I see

    ah I see
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    uhhh... is this a personal experience or a reference I don't get? I'm gonna assume it's legit...

    uhhh... is this a personal experience or a reference I don't get? I'm gonna assume it's legit asking for advice. yes it's fairly common, and yes guys are often bad at sex
  14. OatMush

    Writing The smartest writer around

    Well um actually I think you're wrong, but I'm only going to make vague statements. That way whatever argument you make I can pivot and pretend I meant something else the whole time. I am very intellectuable
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    Word Game[Closed]

    No rules I guess, game goes on until heat death of the universe
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    Writing There isn't a point to physics if they can be "broken".

    I think you need to work on your communication skills...
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    Writing There isn't a point to physics if they can be "broken".

    I don't know many stories I like that are 100% logical, yet alone consistent physics wise. ...because the human experience isn't logical or consistent. We don't understand most of the things that happen, and crazy coincidences happen all the time. Others have mentioned this, but our current...
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    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    Ok I'm back! Sorry for the long wait! Ok, I read until here: Almost instantly, the blood and my regrets spring to the surface. This is a bit too much for me, I've never self harmed but many people I've been close to have, so this is a little too close to home for me. But you did of course...
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    like the video, song not so much

    like the video, song not so much
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    I thought you'd spammed a billion posts today, turns out I've just been scrolling down your...

    I thought you'd spammed a billion posts today, turns out I've just been scrolling down your profile :sweating_profusely:
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