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  1. Story_Marc

    First Chapter Analysis

    Sorry, but what I did before was an exclusive event. I seldom give feedback for free anymore, barring exceptions like above when I was amused by this old thread being resurrected. That said, I'll be releasing far more stuff to help writers again, if you wish to follow that, and I will start...
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    First Chapter Analysis

    If you want other tips, follow my content. Or commission me for consulting if you wish to customize advice. :s_wink: As I said, I was humoring. The audacity of resurrecting this old thread amused me.
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    Is it okay to tell readers when so and so is about to start after such and such chapter

    That sounds like the actions of an insecure writer.
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    First Chapter Analysis

    ...I'm going to humor this since it's almost March 1st, when I launch everything. So, there's quite a bit of good here, but I'm noticing a bit of pacing issues, tone issues, and unnecessary bloat which makes the prose feel heavier than necessary. 1. Pacing Drag at the Start – The opening...
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    What happened to the guy who used to post his YouTube videos with writing tips?

    Still do. :ROFLMAO: But I'm excited for it all.
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    What happened to the guy who used to post his YouTube videos with writing tips?

    I know it isn't. :LOL: It doesn't go online until March 1st -- the same day as my YouTube return. I did say I'm preparing the site.
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    What happened to the guy who used to post his YouTube videos with writing tips?

    I'm right here. :s_wink: I have been keeping people updated in the YouTube community tab. So, for those who don't know, I purchased a website near the end of last year. There is a LOT I wish to cover and do to help others elevate their writing, and I needed the proper infrastructure for it. So...
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    How did you improve your descriptive writing?

    I studied and practiced a lot. And made videos breaking down concepts to force myself to understand them better.
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    Tell me the New Year's Resolution that you will keep. No, seriously, I'll follow through this year. Don't give me that look.

    Though I'm not perfect, I tend to follow through on my New Year resolutions. I've gotten better at it over these last few years. Really, since 2021 when I got pissed off near the end of the year and made sure to get certain things in motion no matter how much it sucked, starting with the...
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    What is the difference between writing web novels and writing in the traditional publishing style?

    Plenty of differences, honestly. Plus it helps to think of the audiences a bit differently at times (depending on the genre), since they can serve differing needs. First, you'll hear people say "rules" because they're thinking about it in a conventional manner. This is the wrong way to think...
  11. Story_Marc

    Rethinking Genre (and Why It's Important)

    This has been on my mind for about a week now, since my last IRL writing group meeting. So, figured I'd open up a bit about what I've been thinking about. Curious what others think. Also, experimenting with a new format.
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    Avoid Protagonist Issues with The Eight Universal Protagonists

    There are quite a few differences, though it's something I'll be going into soon. It's why in the guide I'm building, I devote a whole section to the differences between each of the conflicts. That and similarities.
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    Trivial considerations on good writing: Show, don’t tell.

    Man, if only there was some smart and handsome writer who has already tackled this beyond surface-level observations...
  14. Story_Marc

    Avoid Protagonist Issues with The Eight Universal Protagonists

    I will cover all variants of The Lover sooner or later. :s_wink:
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    Genre Blending with Primary & Subordinate Conflicts

    I've been thinking on this more during the week and, building on what I mention in this about genre blending, I'm wondering if it might be best to make a whole section of setting as a genre separate from plot. Like how Star Wars has a Sci-Fi genre (and I can get more specific if I think on it...
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    Avoid Protagonist Issues with The Eight Universal Protagonists

    I've been cooking so much this week... The sheer number of breakthroughs I've had are mindblowing... This is just a taste of what I've figured out, building off of what I began with The Story Marc Plotting Method. And I hope this helps you with your protagonists as this is just the start of...
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    Avoiding Disliked Endings

    My new system, built around the Universal Conflicts, resulted in me having a new perspective on things when mixed with an old lesson. Maybe it'll be useful to you.
  18. Story_Marc

    Genre Blending with Primary & Subordinate Conflicts

    So, first, I created a whole PDF which serves as a writing instructional book for plotting. It's in the link on the video if you wish to dig deeper into it. Uses a different method than anything you've heard before and this video touches on one of the uses with genre blending. Furthermore, I...
  19. Story_Marc

    Am I actually really smart?

    Without showing us examples of the clues and how you worked through them, it’s hard for anyone to assess what’s actually happening here. If someone were a genius, I think they’d likely anticipate this kind of response and provide evidence to support their claim beforehand. For instance, you...
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    What You Need to Learn about Plot Structure

    Hence, I do what I do. :ROFLMAO: It's also why I maintain that understanding is more important than advice in the long term. I wouldn't have made it to where I am without studying what I have, after all.
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