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Honestly, I can't read wuxia any more than I can eat poison ivy. The idea that some Chinese stick figure with zero hours in the gym can turn me, a well-built dude with training in multiple forms of self-defense, into a pretzel because he's the protagonist makes me sick. If you hadn't read some...

And by comparison, how old is SH?

I'm gonna make time to finish what you've posted, I promise

I recommend doing push ups. That always gets my braincells moving.

Former A-list supermodel forced into retirement after losing her eye in a mugging. Now a private detective who spends her days fighting crime and looking fabulous while doing it.

A protein shake followed by an electrolyte drink or something with caffeine.

The premise of your story and your style both very closely resembles mine. After reading the first chapter, I guarantee that I'll make time to read it and leave a review.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1549892/the-legend-of--heavens/ That reminds me: burn this too

Ditto. The only thing that comes to mind right now is Genshin Impact, and I'm only keeping up with that game out of loyalty. My main gripe with it now (besides the EN VA drama) is the predictability and repetitiveness of their plots.

Inconvenient, but hats off to the hustle

Huh, maybe this thing isn't that reliable then

Booyah. BTW this was an emotional scene, the most likely to be written by AI. Man, I'm good~

What kind of universe has never heard of pizza!?!?

I disagree with the Madmcgee. Having the dialogue be a bit cringy fits in this scenario. This second revision to your third revision is a step in the right direction. However, I still highly recommend re-examining your premise. Even though your story seems very popular, it isn't unique in any...

So, in addition to reading your revised chapter 1, I took the time to skim other parts of your story and read the reviews of other readers. It's been a while since I've done one of these critiques, but here I go: Let's get all the bad out first. The first review you received and the last review...

In English, please?

I know what a droideka is, and aside from a modified one from the comics, they don't talk, so it'd make for a pretty boring character. However isn't this a contradiction? A threatening mook would have special qualities and a powerful mook would be threatening. Not all of us can be Captain...

I disagree with the guys above. I thought the Chitauri were a very intimidating enemy force in the context of their universe, same thing with the Fire Nation. Even if they were featured as individuals, they would be a threat, not a comic relief character. The other two are from franchises I know...

Well, it has a Nikke in it

Some of my best concepts were written while dropping the kids off at the pool. It's a great place to think.