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  1. Alkareel

    May I ask for feedback?

    Maybe an hourly update once, when I stock up enough chapters. As for pushing back the first chapter, I think I have roughly established an idea of what to do. Thank you very much for the advice!
  2. Alkareel

    Trash which seems will be of use sometime in the future, so your mama stuffs it hidden...

    Trash which seems will be of use sometime in the future, so your mama stuffs it hidden somewhere? Yes, yes I do.
  3. Alkareel

    May I ask for feedback?

    I see your point. I'm gonna have to think long and hard to see what can be done. Thank you, that was very insightful!
  4. Alkareel

    May I ask for feedback?

    I could do that with RR, but with SH, not really. Since only one chapter update shows on the latest feed per day. I'm thinking it's the hook. Since the beginning seems to be a bit slow-paced, I'm lacking good bait. Would you agree? You made me very much(in a positive sense). Thank you!
  5. Alkareel

    May I ask for feedback?

    It's been a while since I last asked. Anyone there with the energy to give feedback? Or a review? Feel free to even leave comments. I would gladly appreciate it. Even if it makes me— Link to my story in signature.
  6. Alkareel

    Writing Prompt Fever Dream

    Tsk tsk, you shouldn't have swallowed.
  7. Alkareel

    Writing Prompt Fever Dream

    Write one of them down xD I usually forget them immediately, but this one stuck to mind for some reason.
  8. Alkareel

    Writing Prompt Fever Dream

    :blob_evil_two: :blob_melt:
  9. Alkareel

    Writing Prompt Fever Dream

    Well, it could be continued as an apocalypse story, with the MC struggling to determine what is real and what is not.
  10. Alkareel

    Writing Prompt Fever Dream

    So I had a bout of severe vertigo recently and experienced this fever dream. I thought— this could do for a start of a story, but I'm currently already writing one. If anyone wants to take inspiration from this, you're more than welcome to. It starts like this... Some other stuff happened...
  11. Alkareel

    Same, I only found out after a few months of posting there.

    Same, I only found out after a few months of posting there.
  12. Alkareel

    @Agentt I'm gonna start posting on RR as well, since I'm gonna hit 20 chapters soon. Then I'mma...

    @Agentt I'm gonna start posting on RR as well, since I'm gonna hit 20 chapters soon. Then I'mma spread myself on their forums like I do here. :blobtaco:
  13. Alkareel

    @Blitz Thanks, it's a picture of my ML and FL. :blob_evil_two:

    @Blitz Thanks, it's a picture of my ML and FL. :blob_evil_two:
  14. Alkareel

    Eehh, I've always been there lol. I posted another story on there just when it first began. I'm...

    Eehh, I've always been there lol. I posted another story on there just when it first began. I'm surprised at how big it got.
  15. Alkareel

    Wdym??? eh ? ah? uh?

    Wdym??? eh ? ah? uh?
  16. Alkareel

    Eh, what , what happened?

    Eh, what , what happened?
  17. Alkareel

    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Hmmm... That makes sense. Though in the first place I limited chapters into 1000k words so that it'll make it easier for me to pace, as well as for readers to go to the next page. Though it also works against me as readers are critical of the first chapter. Oh well. This has been insightful...
  18. Alkareel

    Free First Chapter Feedback

    The thing I'm going for utilizing the use of a hyphen monologue is that whenever the hyphen appears, you'll immediately know it's the main character's internal monologue. Everyone's calling him that, meaning, everyone recognizes him as that. I'm setting the mother up as eccentric. Herein lies...
  19. Alkareel

    Name of clothes

    Ah, those are two different things lol. here's
  20. Alkareel

    Name of clothes

    Cheongsam +999 armor
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