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"Ah!" I pick up the armor with a sense of pride. The wings look so cute! I eventually figure out how to put it on, and find that Arei was right. It wasn't unbearably heavy at all. Okay, now I need to make a bag with this grass bundle so I don't have to carry that iron bucket in my hands all the...

"This is so cute!" I looked for an open spot where I could put my items. Chresa puts down her items and takes off her jacket. Then she wrapped the jacket around the bronze ingot and the white feather before placing it gently into the fountain.

"Awesome! See you later then, Arei!" Chresa leaves and makes her way to the fountain.

I really like the story so far! I’ll tell you what you can improve on first, and then I’ll tell you what I liked! Grammar-wise: Make sure to check your tenses. The story seems to be written in the present tense, but sometimes you use the past tense of some words. It didn’t happen so often that...

You know, I’m desperate for some extra cash ;-; can I get in on this? I will give feedback

okay, that is really weird @_@ Have you asked some people there? I kind of want to know now too haha.. At the same time, maybe the area that you are in wasn't really affected too much by the war? There might be people who are old enough to remember, but that doesn't mean they experienced it...

Did the french win though? :o

That's pretty interesting... :o My older brother is kind of engaged to a Vietnamese girl. They met in Japan while he was stationed there. I also thought that they would hate Americans a lot... and I was kind of nervous for my brother haha. It seems like her parents are fine with their engagement...

"Nice meeting you Arei! I'm Chresa, and you said the statue in town is Alivia?"

Chresa's eyes light up. "Thank you so much!" I grab the item and leave the token on the counter. "What's your name?"

"Alright! I'll take one bronze ingot and a bundle of long grass as well as.... uh.. Can I perhaps give you a token for those two items and come back for the third item at a different time?"

(Thank you so much! Also will you be using a random generator for the ability?) "I see... Thanks for the suggestion." I look through and decide on.."I'll take a bronze ingot then. Do I need three?"

(Yea, I totally forgot to keep track of my inventory ^^; I'd like to get a list hehe) "Alright. I'll try my luck. I still have a few tokens to spare if anything." I look through the list. I'd definitely want a strong armor, but with my physique, I am not built to carry such heavy material. I...

Ahhh, so they have names. Somehow I didn't think they would. "Thank you. um..." I look at the tokens in my hands and at the statue again. "So each material is one token?" ((How many tokens did she just receive? haha))

Chresa jumps in surprise. "Oh-" I take a deep breath to steady my racing heart. I didn't expect anyone here, but at the same time, it only made sense. "Hello. I was told from the statue in the middle of town that I could buy an armor here with one of these tokens?"

(xD Thanks you two and I hope yall had a good night sleep! I'm back and ready to start again. I will be multitasking, I'll be checking from time to time. ) After resting, Chresa makes her way to the armor shop that the statue told her about. "H-hello?" I say as I enter. I know that no one will...

(On second thought, I'll be off for today ^^ Cya tomorrow! )

(Oopss xD I just meant that Chresa is sleeping haha unless it's not dark yet :0 My bad >.<)

Chresa thanks the statue and waves good bye as she makes her way to the inn. That was certainly not something you experience everyday. But then again, nothing that has happened so far has been what a normal day would consist of. She enters the inn to sleep for the night.