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    Can Someone Tell Me Why This Doesn't Work?

    I’ve read the third chapter and I enjoyed it. There were some minor grammar errors such as small spelling issues, tense differences, spaces between commas, and I believe at one time you flipped from third to first perspective. I felt a bit lost at the beginning, the green threw me for a wide...
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Yay! That’s what’s I was looking for! Yes! :blob_cookie: I was fixing the confusing bits, but I’m happy to hear that it’s clear and has readability! actually, fun fact I was looking at that semi colon {I know exactly which spot you’re talking about}, and it just sort of worked in a weird...
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Trinary, I know you’ve looked at it already, but can you look at Traveler’s first few paragraphs one more time? I changed a few words and contexts to flow a bit better—just wanted a quick look over to make sure it wasn’t as confusing as last time. I’m also trying to work out the ending a bit...
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    Idiosyncrasies

    Pencil shavings bother me
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    Okay, here's a less glib question. . .

    Yeah, like the one time I spent a weekend researching about pregnancy because Ben’s thread about speed runs made me question my own idea about pregnancy. but in all seriousness, I would love to talk about books and written works by other authors that sell outside the internet. It’d be like a...
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    Writing How do I properly portray autism in a characte and where do I even start researching this shit like god damn I can't fuck this up this shit's volatile

    Sorry for the sloppy attachments, these were some things that I found while doing a quick search. Hopefully it’ll help you out Ben. I like the Autistic Spectrum Conditoons image, only for the fact that it has a “Linear” line where autism or Asperger’s can fall. It’s not always one extreme to...
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    Writing How do I properly portray autism in a characte and where do I even start researching this shit like god damn I can't fuck this up this shit's volatile

    My research might actually help here! I would recommend looking up the TEACH model for autism. Yes, I know it’s a teacher supplement to working systems and transitions, but it does go over the importance of communication, time management, and social interactions. On another note, I wouldn’t...
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    Any space fans here?

    if I remember correctly, a rover landed on Mars recently and tweeted about it? I briefly remember it, but it could have been a hazy dream. Lol One time when I was in CA, I was able to see a piece of the Space shuttle that landed there. There were tons of pictures and videos showing how they...
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    Schedule

    Nah, just super busy with too many ideas in my brain. I just wanna write ‘em all. :blob_cookie: There’s just not enough time in the world.
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    Schedule

    I wish I was more consistent with my other stories. I hammered out a two day posting period for my fan fiction, but that’s because I’m enjoying where it’s going. I really should write up the chapters for my original pieces though. Like I have no excuses. Relic is all written out, just needs a...
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    i have compassion fatigue please cheer me up

    Compassion fatigue is rough; sometimes one can only take things one day at a time. I know when I get overwhelmed or burnt out I go for a walk. I look to the sky, see the clouds, listen to the birds chirp or the dogs barking. I hope you feel better. Take care of yourself.
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    Looking For Players for Dungeons & Dragons 5e Campaign...

    No worries! I totally understand! :D I hope the campaign turns out fun too! I'm super excited about where it might go!
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    Looking For Players for Dungeons & Dragons 5e Campaign...

    We’re looking for a dedicated group of players [4-5] for a semi-long campaign. We would like to have a good balance between roleplaying, fighting, and dungeon delving. We will be playing casually. This will be a Co-DM run campaign, so there will be two of us running the game. We are playing 5th...
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    How would pregnancy Speedruns go?

    That was a whole overwhelming introduction Ben lmao. I had to read that three times at least to get the whole thing, and even then I still feel like I’m missing something. Like I think I need to do some research. I’m gonna need to wrap my head around this whole thing for a bit :blob_neutral:
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    What will you be playing?

    Galactic Mermaid
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    Word Association

    Lie
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    Word Association

    Tango
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    Word Association

    Quickstep
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    Word Association

    Slow
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    Writing Prompt Reincarnated into the Madoka Magica universe

    *shivers* Madoka Magica I remember going into the series blind. I might as well have been hit with Truck-kun with how blindsided I was. Haha but this would be an interesting read, it’s too bad I’m swamped with my other stories. Otherwise I might take a crack at it. Lmao ?
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