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What if I told you, 80% of the stuff you write that people read they forget? This is why it is important to make the important 20% stick out as best it can. EX: The quick brown cow munched on grass while an anon shouted about imposters. (BAD) --well unless the cow is more important than...

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I learned that Pancake is a swear word in Russia. Bleen!

This is just my opinion but. 1.) Your novel is _____ 2.) You are ____ are completely different. We live in a free country and people can complain about my rainbow bright x my little pony shipping as disgusting. That's them. It is fine. But it is only an attack when it is about the author...

Have you tried this one? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2015357/overpowered-witch-reincarnation/

THIS. First chapter should really be compressed. It has lots of run-on sentences, overly detailed descriptions. First chapter is very important. I think there is 15 paragraphs before the first bit of dialogue. It really would be better with word count reduction. Also, the chapters are not...

Half off fruit basket! 2lb of sliced fruit for $2

Made a latte and breakfast sandwich