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I saw the review. And I wonder if they read the same story I did. "a bit too verbose"

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Hm Hm?

You can have all you want hehe.

I hope you all will have a wonderful day, no matter what you do or who you're with!

It snowed a bunch, so I'm probably just going to be stuck at home. I kind of wanted to see my Dad, he's not been feeling well since thanksgiving. Though too many people were supposed to be going for my comfort. I'm somewhat torn. I planned to hole up in a corner with a mask and a tablet, but...

@Assurbanipal_II @Nahrenne @HansTrondheim @Queenfisher @minacia @Maple-Leaf @UYScuti @Yorda @EternalSunset0 @Erios909 @Fox-Trot-9 And uh.. everyone else my melting brain forgot.

@Assurbanipal_II Do you think she seems stupid/etc?

@Assurbanipal_II I wanna ask a question, I was looking at the review again(that person did not edit their review, though their comments became nicer after I replied), this is the second person to comment about Lilith's intelligence and it makes me worry she comes off... not the way I intended.

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I used your line. I also updated the genres/tags to hopefully better represent things as they are now. Including, after some previous talk with @Assurbanipal_II - I have now removed the smut tag and put in the adult tag instead. As it seems my understanding between the three, Adult, Mature...

Funny. I say that and then I maybe come up with one? Opinions pls.

I've been trying to a while to rewrite the last line, but I can't seem to convert everything that yours does in as few words, I guess since you suggested it, it's not like.. plagiarism or anything if I just copy it verbatim? I feel a bit bad though. Like some part of my mind is like, "You must...

I shall try your suggestion.

No, thank you so much! Also I've since received some replies from them (I replied to nearly every single one of their 20 comments). And it seems they initially just left some harsh words without as much thought while reading. And now they're actually quite nice and even gave me some words of...