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    The Insomnia Experiment

    Mystery. Mars. Metronome.
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    The Insomnia Experiment

    Secret. Suspicion. Somnambulism.
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    The Insomnia Experiment

    Repeat. Recall.
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    Need FeedBack Urgent! LitRPG Publishing First Volume

    Average ~1300 words per chapter, so a bit over 20k words with 16 chapters. I would say yes, it's very short for a light novel. It's a long novella, at best.
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    The Insomnia Experiment

    We have 20 words limit collectively, not each. This limit was already exhausted in the first response (unless it is judged as breaking the spirit of the experiment), and if you add any over this limit, the words that might be chosen are no longer in our control. So even if we were collectively...
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    How do I write LitRPG/leveling systems and still be consistent with the MC's leveling??

    This. One of my pet peeves with LitRPG is how often it feels like the numbers just don't matter. They are just some arbitrary numbers growing alongside the story, only tangentially showing the MC's growth. They are there, but they have little to no impact (and little to no comparison to what is...
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    Bizarre Memes Thread

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    The Last to Comment Wins

    What did the hay ever do to you to deserve it!
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    Recommendations Enby/Female recommendations?

    You can try Sunspot. I think the MC classifies as NB, but it takes a while to develop that part of the story. I think it's hinted there or there, but the first time it's actually addressed properly is in the third arc.
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    Art is made by Ai can't afford the artist need suggestion

    I agree with the consensus. The 5th one is the most suitable. The rest look too much like a romance cover, not suitable for a story of a father-daughter relationship.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    We have a new manager at work. He's in many ways better than the previous one. But he loves meetings. I just had a 90 minute meeting that could have been an email.
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    Bat Supremacy Thread

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    The Last to Comment Wins

    How can you be dead? There are hot single cows in your area!
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    The Last to Comment Wins

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    Bizarre Memes Thread

    I believe it is. They confused treatment with preventative care.
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    Cat Supremacy Thread

    Those are some of mine
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    Why Isekai?

    I think before Truck-kun, the staple isekai method was a hero summoning?
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    Why Isekai?

    He's an unremarkable accountant by day, but by night, he becomes... Magical Catgirl! Because everyone knows you get the features of whatever bit you when you gain superpowers. Spiderman is spider man. Batman is bat man. Steve has rabies.
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    Help with plot point

    She "just learned" her step-mother tried to kill her, but also showed the evidence of getting abused. But there's also the presumption if innocence, and as a celebrity she might not want to be seen breaking that before the court decides. There is certainly room for some interesting interplay in...
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    Help with plot point

    I would say, consider that trials are a long run. Months or years easily. You can lock the mother up for custody awaiting trial, though the particular rules for that depend on the jurisdiction. This would open the door for her eventually getting released when her guild is not proven, or when...
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