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Why do they call it oven when you of in the cold food of out hot eat the food?

I think your writing is pretty good. Maybe also try writing in active voice more often? Like the subject of the sentence should be what it's actually about. So instead of "there was a person, with blonde hair..." Try "A blonde haired woman..." Hope that's something to point you in the right...

The emperor's new groove? Oh wait you said lamia, nevermind

Let me know if you find it too, it sounds fun to read!

I feel like getting a job flipping burgers to afford a commission would take less effort. Heck, I personally would be way more successful going this route than seducing anybody!

It's funny, seeing so many bad stories or stories that looked interesting but slapped NTR on at the end of the synopsis pissed me off to the point I wrote this story of mine: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/696771/living-it-for-the-plot-litrpg/ And I'd say that my story is actually good! It...

Set up some kind of conflict where your protagonist and antagonist are on opposite sides. By the end, the final decision of what happens with that conflict will be decided, so they're forced to fight to determine what happens. Make the conflict whatever you want: a romance, important decision...

I'd totally read a fanfic of Jimmy neutron in Sherlock Holmes, though.

Ora ora!

I agree with you. The best you can do is come up with a lot of clever plans and ideas over a long period of time that the characters make use of in quick succession to make them look smarter. I'd still hesitate to call them outright geniuses in the story, but I can mark them as clever. Or if you...

I zoomed through it, but it requires you to trust yourself to am extent. There were times I slowed down and reread a sentence to double check if I read it correctly, but that was only once or twice. I feel that the sentence was easy to predict though, in prose or a moving plot it won't be as...

Depends on how the two groups interact. It could be that some monsters or some dungeon cores are just murderous and have no concept of diplomacy, while others do and humans try to determine which a core/monster falls under before jumping to fighting. Or if they're teamed up, it could be out of...

I dig it :blob_okay:

So you really like kids money? (Just messing with you!)

Barely anyone seems to have listened to Hot Wind Blowing, and for good reason, but it's by far the best song in the game when it has absolutely no right to be

Fair warning, some mba specializations only have careers where you're expected to not have kids or a life and work like 16-20+ hours a day. I've heard horror stories from my dad who knew a lot of people who specialized in that. Just make sure your specialization has careers with reasonable hours...

Follow this tutorial and you'll have yourself something good to dance to: Also consider buying one of those tiny spinning disco lights to tape to your ceiling.

The dbz episode where Goku and Piccolo go to the DMV is one of the best episodes of the series

I feel the same way about release that witch, it was great! I stopped at around chapter 900ish since the MC felt a little too authoritarian and long lived prideful factions were suddenly bending the knee to him without a second thought. Still curious how it went from there though. And as for...

Just be careful of the constipation. The headaches and little bit of trouble sleeping I could handle, but not the sheer level of constipation.