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    Random fantasy & stuff discussion

    I think a great example would be the manga "frieren at the funeral" (free on mangadex) A longlived elf who outlives all her former adventure comrades.
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    Authors: What was your reaction to your first 1 star rating?

    I would like to know if a rating of a deleted account stays. I am a little troubled that my rating dropped from 4.7 to 4.3 in the last month, while there was not a single bad comment I got on this side. My grammar isn't the best, but that wasn't an issue before. Also the story might be a little...
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    Asking for guidance

    Thank you for the nice words. It already helps if you say the first pages are fine, because the chapters 1 annd 2 are just character introduction and like this the weakest (in my opinion). For the nudity scene: It's more a creepy Frankenstein situation, caused by the monster (who is maybe a...
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    Asking for guidance

    I don't know if this is the right place to post this. I am now for quite some time reader on this site. And maybe inspired by this I made a story. Now I've read here quite some posts about that the first story is supposed to be bad, it should be short and after that you start something real or...
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