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  1. Jerynboe

    Happy end? Or just lazy writing?

    You can have all of the immediate problems be resolved and call it a happy ending. A tacit acknowledgement that there were still issues but things never got *that bad* again is still a happy ending. It’s also not implausible that the loose ends just can’t get their shit together enough to be a...
  2. Jerynboe

    What makes you motivated?

    I made a deal with myself when I started writing. I’d keep going until it wasn’t fun anymore. I’m up to around 450 chapters across 3 stories over the course of 3 years. I’ve slowed down quite a bit, with the tradeoff of somewhat higher quality. In terms of external motivation? I know at least...
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    Success for Anonymity?

    Eh. Bummer. Buuut I have a mortgage and a daughter and other hobbies. I wouldn’t even need to make all that much for it to be life changing amounts of money, and “people want to make a broadway adaptations” is diving hard into the real job money zone. If I really wanted recognition I’d proceed...
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    Success for Anonymity?

    Given that the only book I have actually finished thus far was 330 chapters of smutty fanfiction, I’d take the deal just for the sheer surreal glory of seeing it become a bestseller. I’d also like having enough money to stop working at my dead end job. The lack of personal recognition would...
  5. Jerynboe

    Today I started to outline my story

    You noticed a problem in your process and are attempting something to address it. I hope it works and even if it doesn’t I suggest you keep iterating until you are the kind of writer you want to be.
  6. Jerynboe

    What's your opinion on making up new words?

    To paraphrase a book I read recently, “Did you understand what I meant? Then it’s a real word.” If it communicates as intended, then it’s a perfectly cromulent word. That said, something deep within me shuddered when I read offeringly. It feels off as a word; wrong, despite being perfectly...
  7. Jerynboe

    Honestly, sometimes I hate it when you turn a medium into live action

    The mouse is of course guilty of many crimes, but the majority of anime adaptations to live action are also not held in particularly high regards. Of course there’s also the more fundamental problem that adaptation is hard to do well in general.
  8. Jerynboe

    Worst response your books have ever gotten?

    Fool Moon is, IMO, one of the worst books in the series. Not awful in isolation, but the weakest entry unless you are very very sensitive to jokes about attractive women’s bodies, in which Blood Ties is probably worse. As far as the superhero thing… sorta? Changes, book 12, very much earns its...
  9. Jerynboe

    Worst response your books have ever gotten?

    Oh. And since I went off on a tangent I might as well respond to the actual thread. On my first story, a smutty isekai harem fanfic, I recieved multiple complaints about my MC not being more overpowered, making any mistakes ever, and not immediately mastering multiple martial arts. For context...
  10. Jerynboe

    Worst response your books have ever gotten?

    I kinda take the stance that the more you show your work, the more you have earned the right to use the creature. Either by going hard and building your own version that is entirely unique like a certain puppet said, or integrating the IRL culture’s beliefs into it. This goes double if there is...
  11. Jerynboe

    Worst response your books have ever gotten?

    This is the problem with Punching Up as applied to groups as opposed to individuals. It very quickly goes from “I can be an asshole to rich people and celebrities” to “I can be an asshole to anyone I want if I can argue they share traits with someone powerful.” That said, I hope the skinwalkers...
  12. Jerynboe

    Bizarre Memes Thread

  13. Jerynboe

    First Time DND Player

    Me personally? I use the honor system. My players know they aren’t supposed to pull esoteric knowledge out of their asses, and so they play dumb most of the time. They call each other out more often than I call them out, and sometimes they go out of their way to take the schmuck bait. If you’ve...
  14. Jerynboe

    First Time DND Player

    Forever DM here. It’s a different style of play, and a more demanding one, but neither better nor worse. Personally I like DMing more than playing. AS FOR BECOMING A DM. Everything I said about being a player is even more true, but with caveats. 1. Your job is no longer to know your...
  15. Jerynboe

    First Time DND Player

    1. Know your character. If you are not the DM, your primary responsibilities are to know what your character is capable of and what they will do. Improv skills help, as well as knowing everything on your character sheet in at least moderate detail. 2. Be patient, listen, and ask questions if...
  16. Jerynboe

    Can you withstand immortality?

    I’m pretty sure that if I became immortal I’d end up with a progressively more alien mindset, instead of being overcome with desire to end it. Grief sucks big ol donkey balls, but everyone goes through it regardless. Probably the best use of my time would be to accumulate money and work towards...
  17. Jerynboe

    What You Need To Survive Any Type Of Zombie Apocalypse.

    Acquire a friendly, pro-social redneck homesteader. Best if you are already friends before the apocalypse starts. I know stereotypes say these don’t exist, but they are more common than you might think.
  18. Jerynboe

    This novel plagiarized?

    Might want to link it to the person you believe to be the original writer to handle it as they see fit, if it is indeed a 1:1. Not sure what you expect random forumites to do.
  19. Jerynboe

    How to write evil characters?

    To be fair, even the cartoonishly evil from the beginning types should have something they are aiming at. Like, even Captain Planet villains just really fucking hate the environment for some reason. You don’t need to explain it, but you probably shouldn’t have them shift tracks and hate true...
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    cannibalism question

    It isn’t cannibalism but I don’t blame someone for feeling squicked about it, especially if it ate a person super recently. Also assuming you don’t like… eat its stomach and the contents thereof.
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