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@Moonpearl I am interested, but honestly, I'm also intensely trying to not write even though I...
@Moonpearl I am interested, but honestly, I'm also intensely trying to not write even though I intensely want to write want to write at the same time, right now. But I am interested, truly, but honestly, I think a bunch of people would be, stuff like D&D is sooooo fun.- Scribbler
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Hmmmm, I see. And a little disappointed. Oh, wow, and only a two person.
Hmmmm, I see. And a little disappointed. Oh, wow, and only a two person.- Scribbler
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charge your phone. I'm getting nervous from seeing it so low
charge your phone. I'm getting nervous from seeing it so low- Scribbler
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Aaaand, even if the plot isn't original in the least bit, as long as you write it in your own...
Aaaand, even if the plot isn't original in the least bit, as long as you write it in your own voice then it will still seem original- Scribbler
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@Moonpearl You should still share your rpg stories even if you think they're cliche. I think a...
@Moonpearl You should still share your rpg stories even if you think they're cliche. I think a lot of people like rpg stories, myself included, and it might seem cliche to you, but it might not actually be, or maybe it's okay for it be cliche, I mean, most stories don't start out original but...- Scribbler
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*pat pat* There ain't nothing bad about cheap comedy. It's still comedy!
*pat pat* There ain't nothing bad about cheap comedy. It's still comedy!- Scribbler
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Anyone want to beta for me?
I respectfully disagree with me overusing the word I. But I will heavily think about the way I place dialogue and narrative.- Scribbler
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Can I get a beta-reader or two?
I must respect the authors who can disagree with their feedback. It's hard to not sound like an asshole when disagreeing with someone. So you must handle it with tons of finesse.- Scribbler
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Regarding Feedback Threads?
I also think we should add a Tone: too. I usually won't read anything with a tone that's too dark and serious, or anything that's too comedic and nonsensical.- Scribbler
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My synopsis is usually the first paragraph of the story
My synopsis is usually the first paragraph of the story- Scribbler
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No joke, writing is mentally exhausting
No joke, writing is mentally exhausting- Scribbler
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Now if I could fast forward that to two times speed, I would be blissful
Now if I could fast forward that to two times speed, I would be blissful- Scribbler
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Holiday Extras for Your Readers
I don't have a story going on, but if I did, I don't think I would. Though it would probably depend greatly on the cast. I mean, if the MC doesn't really have any close friends then I definitely wouldn't. But if the main characters were a father and daughter and maybe some traveling companions...- Scribbler
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Roast your own story!
I don't think my writing has enough heart. It feels too detached.- Scribbler
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Anyone want to beta for me?
I cannot say I agree with you fully or disagree with you fully. I could probably remove half of them and replace them with a comma, though. But it's also kind of a stylistic decision.- Scribbler
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Anyone want to beta for me?
Um, what are him sentences exactly? Would you give me an example? Do you mean I begin too many sentences with I? Sandman kind of is a cooler name than nightmare slayer. It's definitely less edgy and more mystical.- Scribbler
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Making coffee every morning has become a ritual for me.
Making coffee every morning has become a ritual for me.- Scribbler
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