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  1. Sylver

    Rejected Cover

    Boobies are <3 And yea you'll need to make booby smaller or make dress a bit higher cx Or if you want to try and get away with it, maybe put the title across the cleavage to sort of censor it?
  2. Sylver

    I like candy! :blob_aww: :blob_gift: I like can-dy! :meowsip::blob_highfive: Eye like...

    I like candy! :blob_aww: :blob_gift: I like can-dy! :meowsip::blob_highfive: Eye like Kan-Dee! :blobtaco::blob_party:
  3. Sylver

    Rejected Cover

    Boobs <3 That said, I have a few comments 1. The clothes blend in with the skin, the color is too close. But you figured that already. 2. The camera position looks down on the woman which rewards viewers with more boobies, but more boobies turns the hub's alert systems on, so I'd recommend...
  4. Sylver

    My story's first comic

    Cute :blob_aww:
  5. Sylver

    My attempt at a Might versus Magic fight

    Yay! :blob_party::blob_highfive: Ah, understanding :blob_evil_two: I thought it helped explain certain actions and magic spells so that the audience could keep up. I'll keep in mind to change that, maybe reduce it so that it doesn't disrupt the flow as much. Yea very true, Alma was inspired by...
  6. Sylver

    How do you come up with names?

    I don't know who went fishing for this post, it's 5 years old cx but hey I'll contribute, why not? It depends on the genre you're writing for. Modern time period means modern day names. Sci fi means getting creative with the spell and pronunciation. Fantasy names can be drawn from Dungeons &...
  7. Sylver

    Is it okay if i just take a long break?

    Yea of course. Let your followers know by posting it in your latest chapter, the first chapter, and on your profile. If you have any Patreon or donations site, you want to let them know as well. You don't need to share too much when explaining why, just keep it simple. If it's burnout or real...
  8. Sylver

    How do you write action scenes?

    In short, your chapter was alright and offered some good insight in describing quick action through burst stand alone sentences. The sound effects are a neat touch, I add them to my fights as well, but I change the format and prefer keeping the sound effects apart to highlight the narrative...
  9. Sylver

    My attempt at a Might versus Magic fight

    Not gunna lie, kinda bashful about sharing my work heh :sweat_smile: but I can't expand or improve by living in a bubble. This is the follow-up chapter I had asked about in the Author General forum a few days back, in short its a duel between a Magic User versus a non-Magic user. I...
  10. Sylver

    How do you write action scenes?

    Hi everyone! Thank you guys for your response, I went and read through the numerous chapters some of you shared, it was all very helpful. I just published my action chapter tonight, and damn that took me a good few hours to complete. I learned a couple things: 1. Writing action is hard. You...
  11. Sylver

    I've got this adorable little bird nest right out my front door, and seeing those birdies come...

    I've got this adorable little bird nest right out my front door, and seeing those birdies come back and nest is such a mood lifter :blob_aww: Their little tweet tweets is so relaxing :blob_happy:
  12. Sylver

    How do you write action scenes?

    I'll be publishing a chapter tomorrow that's a duel between a Magic User and a Non-Magic User, with the overall theme being Might versus Magic. But I'm trying something new with how I convey my action scenes on chapter :blob_hmm: so it got me wondering how you guys write your action scenes...
  13. Sylver

    Recommendations Enby/Female recommendations?

    Oh. Hmm, idk I'll have to bow out in that case :sweat_smile: I'm not very knowledgeable on non-binary stories on this site. But wish them luck in finding what they're looking for! :blobthumbsup:
  14. Sylver

    Go the smut route or not?

    Then keep ot sfw :blob_evil_two: no harm in that, some readers would appreciate that. Lot of users aren't searching for smut here, so your story might offer that middle ground for them. You could go a fade to black route, or simply stick to the intimacy being limited to kissing, cuddling...
  15. Sylver

    What is the game you have played the most?

    Ooooh do it! It's got plenty of content to enjoy :love:
  16. Sylver

    Connect Characters and Systems

    I uhh... hmm :blob_hmm: gunna be honest, never really saw it that way before. Inter perspective.
  17. Sylver

    Writing If your protagonist lived in the real world, what nationality might your protagonist be?

    Spanish. Which would come as a surprise if any users here follow my story, I'm talking about the male lead here. The female lead would likely be European descent, half French specifically. I haven't considered what nationality she would be, but her dad is French. She's a cat girl so... cat...
  18. Sylver

    [Discussion] In your understanding, what is martial art?

    How do you think I feel? I use to have a crush on him in Dragon Ball :blob_pout: seeing how he was done in Z hurt, and the haircut he had in the Cell saga was even worse! :blob_popcorn_two: Ah well, at least he was cool in Dragon Ball.
  19. Sylver

    I think I get isekai now (warning: navel-gazing ahead)

    Not a fan of isekai, mainly because the Mangas get pretty same-y in concept and execution. Sword Art Online popularized the genre so much that it's become the McDonalds of Manga genre. A majority of fantasy-based stories now follow the Isekai genre, which bites because I miss the imagination and...
  20. Sylver

    What is the game you have played the most?

    Baldurs Gate 3 :blob_evil_two: I'm playing it whenever I'm free. Playing it rn actually :blob_whistle_two: love playing as a little Halfling Ranger, she makes the perfect Hunter :blob_hide: peaking from the shadows, striking at the right moment. Plus the romances :blob_melt: not the bear scene...
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