Search results

  1. ACertainPassingUser

    Backstory now or later?

    Dont use prologue Chapter. Just put those in chapter one. Many people skip those "prologue chapter" because they decidedly knew those weren't that important to the story, and start at chapter one right away.
  2. ACertainPassingUser

    Character Draft: Heroine, Version 1

    In my opinion, the early days of the heroine should be filled with her feeling the immaturity of our Male MC. Its like when you look back at your childhood days and feel embarrassed by what you and your classmate is doing. Please take that into account.
  3. ACertainPassingUser

    The Plot without the Protagonist

    The plot can move without the protagonist. It simply became a story with one less character. Whether the Good guys win or the Bad guys win, all of them are simply a powershift after powershift.
  4. ACertainPassingUser

    What is average standard for stories on scribblehub nowadays

    "Do whatever you want" is a bad advice and bad mentality, and Its more of a consolation words. Theyre more of a coping mechanism than actual advice to follow. ------ There are bullshit you can get away with, there are bullshit you can't tho ----- Observe Observe at reality, Then observe...
  5. ACertainPassingUser

    I goofed on the limitation of a character’s ability

    And lets add a twist on it, she has no friend yet. She's just recently got isekai-ed here. And therefore, the journey is to learn how to make new friends, interact with these new people, and how to play nice with the new culture and use appropriate mask for the right target.
  6. ACertainPassingUser

    Draft Idea 6: First Arc Is About What?

    First arc should be about the world building and how the protagonist interact with the world. The thing is, the Protagonist we first met doesnt have to be the permanent protagonist for the rest of the story. You can even kill off the first protagonist we met and change him/her with someone else.
  7. ACertainPassingUser

    Hilarious Writing Mishap

    Its normal for people to forget days and time and such, and even forget what month and year today is. Usualy happen with people that have been graduated from school and college. Whether they're jobless or busy at work. Many worker relish that they could have sunday or even saturday vacation...
  8. ACertainPassingUser

    Quick MHA summary

    MHA is pretty much a 200+ chapter/4-5 Season of worldbuilding and Introduction of the world before the main plot actually begins and something inportant happened to the world itself.
  9. ACertainPassingUser

    How to explain a complex power system.

    Copy paste another novel's complex power system. Done.
  10. ACertainPassingUser

    Written into a corner.

    Time to remove the MC of the protagonist main POV status, and pass it on the "brat" instead. I dont like losing protagonist. Many people dont like losing protagonist. This is rude and an insult to your MC, but this is not a lie. If MC lose at training, its acceptable. But If he lose at actual...
  11. ACertainPassingUser

    So many pointless Isekai

    Yep The more i read Isekai, the more i don't want to be Isekai-ed. The reason people watch Isekai is to escape the constant challange of those economics, Hobbies, Critical thinking, and the skill to read and write in our modern world.
  12. ACertainPassingUser

    Writing short sighted MCs

    Timeloop MC are usually short sighted by the nature of their power, as they focus more on instant reaponse and relust they searched for, while the long tern effect are usually just an afterthought, or something to be fixed in another loop if possible.
  13. ACertainPassingUser

    I finally finished my first, blind playthrough of Elden Ring.

    Would you like to sail the seven seas ? ?⛵️?‍☠️
  14. ACertainPassingUser

    Anime to watch before isekai~ing

    Studio Ghibli animes. Nausicaa of the valley Castle in the sky Graves of the firelfies My neighbor Totoro Kiki's delivery service Omoide poroporo/Only yesterday Porco Rosso Whisper of the heart Princess Mononoke Spirited Away The Cat retuns Howl's moving castle Ponyo The wind rises...
  15. ACertainPassingUser

    Work to future vs Save her in the past

    It turns out your missing little sister have become a magical girl and she's been sacrificing herself to seal the great evil, She crystalize herself and the great evil in order to do that. They're stuck in time, inside the great crystal, and nobody can destroy them or free them yet. Now after...
  16. ACertainPassingUser

    What do you think of only Female Party member trope in the Story?

    Everyone is female troll, unless there's a Pic proving theyre a male Basically the rule of anime, manga, and fantasy world in general.
  17. ACertainPassingUser

    What do you think of only Female Party member trope in the Story?

    There are many old shounen anime with 2 boy and 1 girl, and with how close they're from being childhood firends, i think their dynamic wouldnt change that much if there are two girls and one boy instead. Not to mention that shounen boys and girls are veing voiced by female VA. Sometimes i play...
  18. ACertainPassingUser

    When it comes to FMC, what race/species do most readers want to read about the most?

    The demand for Human Protagonists is extremely high. Even if they transform into half-vampires, skeletons, or other creatures, their thought processes should retain a human perspective, at least temporarily. It's effective to include relatable thoughts or actions that echo our own, which is...
  19. ACertainPassingUser

    What exactly makes a LitRPG?

    The existence of System That's about it. Every chinese story with system qualifies as LitRPG, despite the massive difference in plot, morality, culture, and tones in comparison to western LitRPG They still qualify as LitRPG.
  20. ACertainPassingUser

    What do you think is the strongest emotion in human?

    The strongest emotion is the emotion youre currently feeling. Angry focused techniques works best when angry. Sad focused techniques works best when sad. Bored focused technique tend to fail because doing activity always resolve boredom and changing it into exhaustion. Exhaustion focused...
Top