Okay the synopsis are fine. Just fine, but it could be a bit tighter.
moving on to the first chapter, you have great world building. And good writing. But I have one thing to say here the part where the vampire dies and the perspective switches is a bit could use a line break or something And...
Maybe I should do a feedback thread-nya... but I can't do that due to some reasons. So whoever sees this and posts here gets feedback from me, though I doubt anyone would want that