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  1. Daydreamers

    @Nahrenne Unfortunately, that's all there is: just a sound; @RepresentingGluttony I might be...

    @Nahrenne Unfortunately, that's all there is: just a sound; @RepresentingGluttony I might be empty; but I'm not that low yet to listen to a cow
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    I'm an empty shell, I used to be full, but the day I decided to open my mind... phwosh...

    I'm an empty shell, I used to be full, but the day I decided to open my mind... phwosh... everything slipped away
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    A 100?? Even a baby daydreamer, can one punch a gorilla into extinction; we shape our realities

    A 100?? Even a baby daydreamer, can one punch a gorilla into extinction; we shape our realities
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    1 Gorilla

    1 Gorilla
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    But ? will
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    Might I suggest you... see a vet

    Might I suggest you... see a vet
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    How does GPT see you?

    Yes, I don't know who corrupted it
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    How does GPT see you?

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    No I'm not, my bad, didn't realize Pun-Pun was taken

    No I'm not, my bad, didn't realize Pun-Pun was taken
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    Feedback exchange

    I like the idea behind your story and I enjoyed it; even though I was a bit confused; but clarity is an issue; most readers might feel lost, and it's alright to be lost in this kind of story, but if you could make it less abstract without damaging the style or your intentions it could be more...
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    or lacking clarity: a high chance if it never occurs to them the answer itself could be at fault;

    or lacking clarity: a high chance if it never occurs to them the answer itself could be at fault;
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    Sell me on your MC, not your story

    I don't know how to describe them; take it or leave it :blob_neutral:
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    How to keep plotting when depressed?

    Music, it always helps me get into the mood when I have no energy;
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    Take care; you know a 100 men can still beat a gorilla?

    Take care; you know a 100 men can still beat a gorilla?
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    they should use (پ) "new letter for P" with "B=ب" it means piss :blob_hide:

    they should use (پ) "new letter for P" with "B=ب" it means piss :blob_hide:
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    Show, don’t tell.

    You need to be a good reader to know; I'd say don't tell emotions, the rest is a matter of pacing and the type of story you're writing;
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    He isn't and you aren't
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    Do two and alternate every 5 min or so :blob_unsure:

    Do two and alternate every 5 min or so :blob_unsure:
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    :blob_sir: Good morning
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