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Thank you for this, miss/sir? Sigh, the problem is that this is a very important work for me, and as gratitude, I can't do anything but read your work!!!! I'm really thankful to you, I'll try to add more details and will improve as I continue. Thanks again:blob_highfive:

Well, it's a fight scene from Chapter 6. I hate it; this whole sequence is so bad. Well, it's all rigid and awkward, like someone trying to tell a story but just can't. For this scene, your opinion will be different, but after this chapter, I just stopped.

First, I have a complete outline for my story that includes every major twist, the main antagonist, and even details about when the main characters' loved ones will die. Second, what frustrates me is that I feel stuck. It’s not that my writing skills aren’t improving; it's more that I...

agaboga bboo, that's what I understood by that language. btw plot is good. Like when you wrote hangbang bmdorn, man, it made me cry. What a great story. Good work.

Hey, brother. It's been a while, hasn’t it?:sneaky: (If you remember, I think you don't remember.) I appreciate the solid advice, but the issue has already been resolved(I stopped for a while), and now I want to write, but I just can't seem to do it. Well, I hope you’re doing well.:blob_cookie:

I have a question. I understand that readers want to know what Arkam is thinking when he fights or kills. However, why would Arkam reflect on his thoughts during such moments? For him—given the nature of his job—killing should be instinctual. Consider it like this: a person who has never...

Yes... Yes, you did, Rainy.:s_wink: I outlined the entire story and the first arc while I created important character sheets.

Yuin, you should take a break, man. :blob_cookie: Like, please, this much feedback and reading is unhealthy for you:ROFLMAO:, and btw, good work.(y)

Sigh, I don't know what to do about my inconsistency. I've written six chapters in two and a half months—what even is that?! It's not that I need rest or that the story I'm writing is bad; I have the whole thing in my mind, but it just doesn't flow. It seems to vanish whenever I try to write...

Hey, I’m back! How are you, brother? I hope all is well. I know this is my third time reaching out, but I don’t care! You’re the reason I continued this series. I was actually thinking of stopping after the first two chapters, so thank you for that! I'm not here to ask for feedback; I just...

nah, sorry for that, good lady.

Love that, and I will not, good sir. And thank you. :s_smile:

Is it okay to say, "Do this here," but who really gives a f***? As you can see from the title, today, July 10th, I officially became an adult. Yay! (Inside, I'm dead:s_smile:.) I hope that this year and the next will be good as I drift through adulthood. I would love to hear some good stories...

Hey, roast mine. My friend roasted me, so let's see what a stranger will do. :blob_cookie: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1614643/the-pristine/

Damn, my work really feels like a draft with no substance. It’s a bit of a mess. Thank you for making my life easier. This fight—or rather, the entire series I wrote—is in its very early stages, the zero draft. I’m looking for feedback and corrections from experienced players. (like you) Thank...

Well, congratulations!:s_smile: I'm currently in my last year of high school. My new classes have started, but I didn’t attend for 10 days. The last day of the month is approaching. (I just wanted to share a bit about my personal life:blob_cookie:) Again, congratulations...

What the heck, man? You're a reader—so write something! This is the writing of someone who reads well, consumes quality material, and produces good content. I don’t have any questions about the technical aspects, as what I wrote is just a zero draft, an alpha version of my writing. And yes...

I'm currently writing the sixth chapter of my story, where a big fight is taking place. However, I feel something is off—there's no tension, and it seems like no one is actually winning. My final boss for this arc is a demon in human form, but he doesn't come across as intimidating enough. As...

Oh, great. What breed? (I have a bulldog.)

Relatable, I created this thread to mess around, have fun, and chat with experienced people. You all for being so supportive.:blob_cookie: