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    As an author, how do you feel when writing villains who commit crimes or immoral acts?

    For villains, there are two kinds I accept, and one I don't. The first, most easy to write would be the selfish type. This kind of person exists. If they see an advantage they may go for it, no matter the cost (for others, but that's a sacrifice they are willing to make). They'll steal, ploy...
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    I need a non-swear swear word

    Wench good-for-nothing... (add occupation) Scoundrel Douche Any of that helpful?
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    Simple Elemental Magic

    Clearly water. As this was what my first original character was about. A perfect elemental being that can form any possible structure with water and accelerate it to incredible speeds. To me, it's the most versatile. Although, depending on what you attribute to darkness, it may do similar...
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    What's your favorite type of Magic System?

    In general, for a common fantasy world, I'd like to avoid all those where magic allows individuals to change the topography. Weapons like swords and shields have to remain relevant, or every non-mage simply gets lost in irrelevance. This kind of nobody can carry any weight is like the worst for...
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    If SH members visit your country, what food would you recommend?

    Depends on whether one wants traditional cuisine, or just to eat well. In the former, I'd recommend for Germany, to find a restaurant that serves "Haxe" (pork knuckle; though, you likely won't find it under that term). (it should look like this) However, I should warn that one could use to have...
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    Advice for New ScribbleHub Authors

    But please not when the MC is a guy! Those covers are LIES!!!!
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    Recommendations Short stories...

    Not sure if this counts, but I'm working on an anthology about a group of angels in my Eldritch story (the first having made its appearance in the most recent chapter), each featuring an individual angel's origin. Those would be more short story-like.
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    What motivated you to stop being a reader and write your own fiction?

    I think a strong influence was how disappointed I was about the second twist in "I'm a Spider, so What?" For those who know/don't mind the spoiler: I felt so betrayed back then. Like the one point of the novel was suddenly erased. After that, I was quite often disappointed by how non-human MCs...
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    I'm tired of OP heros

    Are we specifically talking about heroes? Because I got an OP character who is absolutely in no need to do any heroic act, but has severe mental issues that come with the way her powers manifest. Yes, she's OP, but she's also a mental wreck, and kinda was so even before the powers.
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    What is the competitive advantage of your story's premise?

    I usually write longer continuations. My stories are transformation stories with heavy emphasis on the psychological aspects. I pretty much like the concept of "power you don't want". The MCs struggle with their fate, and are meant to act as realistically as possible, as someone, who got just...
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    Play devil's advocate for tropes you like.

    Then don't add the human in the first place. I was talking here specifically about transformation and reincarnation. If you want a monster MC, then write an original monster. Why add a human into the mix if you don't want a human?
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    Play devil's advocate for tropes you like.

    Transformation/monster reincarnation stories! Many do them poorly, in my opinion. Especially, if the setup turns their mentality just into what they transformed. They make the new body align with their minds, often turning into straight-up psychopaths. It's hardly interesting if the result is...
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    How are YOU going to fix the genre you hate or dislike?

    Regarding cultivation, I think the biggest issue is invincibility. The main trope, which I also despise most, is that it shows a quite severe Chinese mentality of thinking in tiers. As if there's an impossibility to even measure up to someone above you. I saw several examples of cultivation...
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    BookCovers

    2 and 4 look bad. 2 is overlighted, and 4 got those vacant eyes with the demon girl. 1 looks better than the others, but the demon got a nice, supportive vibe on it. More like the friendly childhood next door, who just happens to look like she came from a Halloween party, not a genuine demonic...
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    Story about yandere

    Not sure how well it qualifies, but my story Slime Girl got a pretty obsessive second MC, who transforms the first MC into a slime and quite severely clings to her. Though, quite often the first MC can get her to make concessions.
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    Lf a novel where the Mc is quiet and absolutely overpowered at the start, like yogiri but way more overpowered

    My story Eldritch got something like that. Although, while she is quite OP, MC is also quite the mental wreck about having turned into a tentacle monster. So she tries to stay incognito and is usually easily pressured, because she got a rather timid personality.
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    Recommendations Looking for some introverts

    I can recommend "Bocchi the Rock" for insight into actual social anxiety. Yes, it's to a degree displayed over the top, but the actual reasoning, inhibitions, social issues are pretty accurate. Stuff like not being able to enter a place, because the feeling of what might happen if you do that...
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    What is the premise of your story in a prompt that readers can understand your story?

    Shari, a medieval village daughter of a herbalist, gets abducted by Liqu, a mutated slime, and transformed into one, obsessed Liqu won't leave her alone, Shari wants to survive/not get killed on sight, while still existing in civilization, fantasy world, with rather basic elemental magic (mages...
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    On a practice I have noticed as being somewhat common.

    I got blocked on RoyalRoad by an author because of commenting. I absolutely swear, I didn't say anything too harsh. I only said I didn't fully buy a scene, where two muggers are directly about to kill a girl by slicing her throat, right next to the main street, after she struggles a bit with...
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    Gimme a fun fact about your main character/s that isn't all that important to the story but interesting to know!

    Shari has the fascinating ability to jinx herself to a degree that it borders propability manipulation. Also, she blames the world (aka me) like a sentient entity to screw things up for her.
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