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    Low View Counts

    Can I just say how much it bums me out when I see stories with hundreds to a thousand pages, with only a couple hundred views. Like, that just kills me on the inside. I mean, what the fuck did that person do in their past life to deserve such a fate. This kind of touches the question of when do...
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    Recent tv series/movie/game/web novel/novel you liked

    What you've been watching/playing/reading recently. tv series: Saiki Kusuo - pacing is a tad too quick but the writing is pretty good. movie: game: Disco Elysium - love talking to the townspeople and seeing how they view things and their personalities. web novel: Death March - perfect balance...
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    Writing Write what you like

    I know what I'm about to say will be nothing new or original, but it's something I've recently discovered and so, I will share it in my own personal way, which is good enough for me. Write what you like. What does that mean? To me, it means that if you want your writing to be good, then you...
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    Is it just me, or is everyone online depressed? Or do I just attract depressed people? Am I some...

    Is it just me, or is everyone online depressed? Or do I just attract depressed people? Am I some shining beacon of hope? Am I a superman?
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    Empty Yourself

    I've never thought about it like that before! You're right! I'll do just that!
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    Empty Yourself

    I've been trying to write a story but I could not. For my last story was a good one. And in trying to write, I kept on trying to write something that was completely different, as good as, or better than my last. But you cannot write a good story that is clouded with thoughts of how your story...
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    Annoyed at how dead the forum feels since it lacks any content I find interesting... *sigh* I...

    Annoyed at how dead the forum feels since it lacks any content I find interesting... *sigh* I should go write
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    The making of a popular story (and the use of marketing and project management)

    You're wrong because you presume everyone writes to be popular instead of any other reason. You're wrong because luck is simply something people attribute to the reason why because the actual reason is too difficult to describe in a way that would become understandable. I agree with your...
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    LF Feedback, don't need anything in-depth, just a simple liked it or didn't will do

    This is probably pointless to post, but I finally realized why this was garbage.
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    Writing Prompt Generator 1: Goblin's Gold

    My problem isn't really finding a story worth starting, but one worth continuing.
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    Writing Prompt Generator 1: Goblin's Gold

    So I've tried starting about half a dozen stories since I finished my last one, and they all felt subpar. So here I am, trying to come up with a new concept once again. What do you think of when you read the title Goblin's Gold? I think of a goblin thief who wants an easy and lavish life, but...
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    LF Feedback, don't need anything in-depth, just a simple liked it or didn't will do

    This is my opinion, but I really think you turned it into your own thing. A lot of my style is pretty vague, so if someone were to edit it, it would carry on it's own or new meaning. I enjoyed the was words, I think they added gravitas. Yours is too quick for my preference. I definitely feel...
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    LF Feedback, don't need anything in-depth, just a simple liked it or didn't will do

    A lot of your changes were stylistic ones that I didn't care for, but I enjoyed the addition of the mentioning of his master. That was interesting, and I actually did play with the idea of doing something similar, later on in the chapter. I must apologize, for of recent date, I've been reading...
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    I actually think it's pretty good, at least, what I've written so far, I just feel mentally...

    I actually think it's pretty good, at least, what I've written so far, I just feel mentally exhausted from having to keep on coming up with stuff, worldbuildingwise.
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    I hate physical description the most out of every aspect of writing. Like, the most I ever do is...

    I hate physical description the most out of every aspect of writing. Like, the most I ever do is like 1 paragraph and then I'm done. But right now, I'm trying third-person, and there's sooo much description and worldbuilding, and it's soooo gosh darn boring, but here's the worst part; IT'S...
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    It's literally more than 600 words of straight description. F this.

    It's literally more than 600 words of straight description. F this.
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    There's so much physical description in this part of my story, and it's killing me. I hate it...

    There's so much physical description in this part of my story, and it's killing me. I hate it sooo much.
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    Suffering is Storytelling.

    Yes, but you must acknowledge, suffering is a very strong word. Even if that is not your meaning when using the word. The word by itself will always carry that connotation.
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    What's Your Motivation?

    Most people don't have any. What reason could there be, to drive a person to greatness. No, there is none. Most people simply write to write, they do not try to be great, to improve. For them, it is only something they are supposed to do, a habit, not something that they want, something that...
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    What does fairyland look like?

    Now, I must preface this by saying I'm not asking you to write my story for me, or, that that isn't my intention. What do you think of when you hear the word fairyland? Because you see, for me, I don't really think of anything. I don't really think of fairies as having homes or jobs they got...
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