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I am writing Dwynveia as very much a deconstruction of the Portal Fantasy as a genre and how actually traumatic being Isekaid would be. In general, my entire party is a broken mess at the currently written point of the story (chapter 152).

Your fight lacks flow to it. It is closer to an old JRPG than an actual battle. The more... grizzly way to write the beginning sequence would be like this: Arkan narrowed his eyes and pulled the trigger. Kashan dove aside at the last moment, painfully breaking his fall with his arm. Cursing, he...

Have you considered you may, in fact, be a "pantser"? Rather than sticking to a strict outline try going with the flow and incorporate your overall ideas along the way. In the past I have tried multiple times to stick with a set structure only for it to fall apart due to a writer's block. So...

Well... My standard approach is "traumatise the MC and go from there". On a more serious note, having watched enough actual war footage I tend to focus on the fights being clumsy and full of mistakes. Split second decisions. Things going very wrong.

Quick note: Hideaki Anno (the author of Evangelion) was depressed and a lot of his writing is born as an expression of that.

My university handbook of Modern Standard Arabic.

I am a 'pantser' so it is slightly different for me but the way I handle it is well... write at my own pace and let story guide me. Sometimes I have to interfere of course, but stories are those beasties that tend to live their own lives, I find. Other than that, do not set yourself arbitrary...

Well... Might as well shill for my own stuff - The Chronicles of Dwynveia Lilyth (the MC) is just a corpo who lost her body and ended up in a bad spot. I am currently writing chapter 151 and she is still very much a somewhat powerful small fish in a very big pond.

This sounds... Uh... Rapey af

I have taken... the middle approach in a way. The MC has some... additional abilities, but so does every Terran who ends up on Dwynveia. And they mostly amount to jack shit. One of her love interests is a granddaughter of a powerful demon mage. She is not the only one, the demon is an...