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    A girl I used to like and went to high school with has four children.

    > Which leads me to thinking of why everyone wants more than two children. Has she heard about kittens?
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    Recommendations Comedy or slice of life recs plz.

    https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/47340/master-this-poor-disciple-died-again-today/chapter/765250/1-the-end https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/86874/saving-the-school-would-have-been-easier-as-a/chapter/1643865/chapter-1
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    What Wedding Anniversary's Present?

    > I know you don’t really know what my partner likes or dislikes, but honestly, I’m out of ideas on what to do. Rent bikes and explore! For material goods, leatherman makes little folding scissors - their Micra is a good keychain fob that they'll use for decades. Or larger folding pliers.
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    Satyr Race Bio

    Whoever comes first, presumably.
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    Dwarven town physics...

    "Oxygen? Sounds elvish."
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    Dwarven town physics...

    https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Windcatcher Also, lit chimneys will draft stale air up them. Flowing water should as well. > Anyway, I ran into this story and it made me wonder if a dwarven town underground or inside a mountain would actually work.... Where's the food come from?
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    What colours would you give for numbers 0 - 9 and why?

    0x000000 is black 0x000001 is very dark gray, slightly blue in hue. ...
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    What's your take on expository world building?

    > expositions relating to worldbuilding Exposition kills dramatic tension and pacing. Keeper of Totality is a bit hard to read for that, for example. Consider "is this sentence really necessary?". Because every sentence has an opportunity cost - it's a sentence that isn't serving mood or...
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    Pig orcs...

    Porcs!
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    Writing How do I write like this

    I think it would help to read the works out loud, and also start memorizing poetry?
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    Writing How do I write like this

    > How In a commonplace book/text file, copy passages that you find striking, and in parallel, write, go on walks, and do improv?
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    I just started writing, any tips will be helpful.

    > If you write very prose heavy like you might find in a traditional western novel you might not be able to connect with readers. Lot’s of detailed prose doesn’t necessarily make something bad, but it’s not what the average SH reader is really looking for. I think it's more that prose light...
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    I just started writing, any tips will be helpful.

    > Any tips would be helpful, Make sure the prologue/ch1 has action or dramatic tension.
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    Wait, I'm in the wrong feast hall!

    > Ahmigatsu! Definitely canon. Wish there were more flaming monastery episodes.
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    Wait, I'm in the wrong feast hall!

    Quarter-assedly skimming this essay which purports to discuss the only known poetry and known myths, the stuff we now have is like 4 lines of skaldic material and that thinness introduces ambiguities where beliefs and practices used to be clear in listeners' heads...
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    I guess a certain infamous website with the number 4 in the name might be dead

    The poor bigots will have to shitpost on Twitter now.
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    Fantasy formal warr

    > tuxes Sort of neo-protestant identical mouse-colored clothing? Unless there was a protestant reformation and like Dutch merchants running around like mice, I'd do something more interesting. Look at Henry 8th, or the Laughing Cavalier. ---...
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    Average rate of healing do you have in your story if a character breaks a bone

    Wouldn't this depend directly on the magic system in play?
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    Good Fights Non OP MC

    https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/107252/god-of-trash-cultivation-litrpg-from-trash-tier/chapter/2092262/1-trash-god https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/47340/master-this-poor-disciple-died-again-today/chapter/765250/1-the-end
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    Check out this novel if it's good and anything that lacks in this novel please give me a feedback

    > I mean, as of writing, I effectively glorified the Holocaust In the absence of context, you're saying something provocative and unpleasant. Cruel, rather. Enough so that I'm not interested in more context or justification.
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