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  1. LEGENDGOD1

    I need help with commerce of my story's world

    Keep pointing out problems, so I can fix it. I would love to utilize your knowledge on such subjects. Well, that's not how I imagine dungeons to be. its a way to maintain some level of capabilities in the species living on the planet. I may need to define why there are dungeons to begin with...
  2. LEGENDGOD1

    I need help with commerce of my story's world

    Well actually, gold is used for making good looking clothes, most other metals are either used for farming tools and Equipment. I already mentioned trading grains. Why Globets? Although this was supposed to be revealed in late volume 3 or volume 4's beginning. This planet is actually a war...
  3. LEGENDGOD1

    I need help with commerce of my story's world

    And yeah, the purity of a material is determined by how well it conducts mana. Gold is a good conductor than titanium, but mostly noone would think much about its mixing too much metal in it as gold is dirt cheap in that world. infact gold collecting is an active business in that world for small...
  4. LEGENDGOD1

    I need help with commerce of my story's world

    So, for intance, this world uses a universal currency named Globet. Will it be Ok if one Gold coin is worth 1 Globet, one titanium coin is worth 10 Globet, platinum coin is worth 100 Globet, Silver coin = 1000 Globet, Mithril = 10000 and so on? Also, trade with accommodations like Grains...
  5. LEGENDGOD1

    Adventurer system

    i have written much of it, just learning the craft of writing. i have done much world building, and yet its not enough, i have completed the outline of first volume of the story even, just trying to figure out what fits well with it. the style, the perspective. and all that
  6. LEGENDGOD1

    Writing How do I write like this

    point me to some good vods. i really need to go heavy on those allusions and metaphors. it does help me but i dont have many in my head, need to load some of them into it
  7. LEGENDGOD1

    I need help with commerce of my story's world

    This is the data i have extracted from the world building outline i made using A.I. but its lacking, any geek here who can help with making it better and vast? World Commerce: Value Hierarchy (Highest to Lowest) Legendary/Unique: Dimensional Pockets (Value = 2 Dark Uru Ingots), Dark Uru...
  8. LEGENDGOD1

    Adventurer system

    because i used A.I to make the roles more descriptive. rest was created by me. don't worry i have added that as warning on top, used ai
  9. LEGENDGOD1

    Adventurer system

    It feels awesome to do this sort of things when I have exams closing in. Onto the Adventurer guild's rank system in my story's world. WARNING: Used A.I. to make the roles more descriptive and geeky. basic layout like age, lvl, names, bands and the view of world was made by yours truly. I used...
  10. LEGENDGOD1

    Am I COOKING Something here?

    Its a shame this info dumb would be impossible in the actual story? i guess. but when this item is involved, it feels like its cheat although it has gross limitations and side-effects on MC who has to continuously suffer because of them.
  11. LEGENDGOD1

    Am I COOKING Something here?

    Yep, actually I have answer to that. so the MC's left eye is actually an indestructible artifact of a higher being SPOILERS: the being is called COSMETA, its a very big concept. and his origin starts from a place where science, technicality and logic ends. that eye of his is a mass information...
  12. LEGENDGOD1

    Am I COOKING Something here?

    it has an advanced A.I. model capable of updating its data according to the info it receives.
  13. LEGENDGOD1

    Am I COOKING Something here?

    hmm, no, the mc doesn't level-up. its the heroes and the demon lord that does. others in the world just try to imitate it. while the mask also imitates a system, it uses scientific measures to provide better analysis. it doesn't provide stats. it provides statistics. and yeah you can call it...
  14. LEGENDGOD1

    Story Feedback

    "I don't like first person, present tense, or Xianxia, but this? There is an elegance to this story that inspires me!" "Magical, Outstanding, Original, Special, Excellent! This is very much worthy of anyone's time." "I don't think I have ever seen better fights or action scenes written down than...
  15. LEGENDGOD1

    Am I COOKING Something here?

    So before you start reading and judging, i wanted to create a unique leveling system. So far i have not read any story with a leveling system like this. so tell me if this works. as i am implementing this in my story. I will also improve chapter 9 and the ones before it. Right now my exams...
  16. LEGENDGOD1

    I don't have words. I used them for my story.?

    I don't have words. I used them for my story.?
  17. LEGENDGOD1

    OOOH THX

    OOOH THX
  18. LEGENDGOD1

    what the hell is pompoms??

    what the hell is pompoms??
  19. LEGENDGOD1

    The winds blew against me, chest broad, Gada slung on my shoulder, that's when i heard fate...

    The winds blew against me, chest broad, Gada slung on my shoulder, that's when i heard fate whisper to me "Fear the Storm". I whispered back, "But, I AM the Storm."
  20. LEGENDGOD1

    no i am just busy with ways to slowly integrate leveling system in my story so that it does not...

    no i am just busy with ways to slowly integrate leveling system in my story so that it does not turn out like other systems thats why i forgot to update.
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