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"If you don't turn it off... I'll get mad!" The voices only got worse and worse. The characters lying on the floor all woke up and stared at him.

Albert's eye widened in surprise and fright. He tried to run, but the horde was coming after him. When would this madness ever end? He heard a voice. "Onii-chan... I told you not to browse there, didn't I? This is your punishment! Behave better next time.~♡" But nobody was there.

Hm... dunno about others, but for me, it's cuz of a personal flaw. Autism combined with light perfectionism often makes me sound mean even when I'm just trying to be honest. I have to edit my feedback over and over if I want to sound okay, lol. Even then it sometimes sounds... off? I'm kinda...

God, I cannot believe I did not notice the spelling mistake in the title lmaoooooo. I agree with every single word here. Novel is good.

I like this story a lotttt! I only reviewed up to chapter 5, but tell me if you want casual bonus feedback on the rest of the story! I added this one to my reading list, it was really good!

Hm... I suppose it depends on what you want your novel to be about. Not everything in it, just the center core. Then focus only on that. My suggestion would be taking out everything that isn't directly related to MC's personal arc, as in her journey on becoming a strong cultivator and traveling...

Here it is! If you have time, feel free to gimme feedback... on the feedback(?) Lol. :blob_cookie:

I promised to come back tomorrow, and I did. This is going to be the last review I will do(?) that is not on my thread. As Fairemont said, the novel was really descriptive and well written. I liked how you kept the pacing just right. Not too slow, not too fast, not too much info, but not too...

Stone or Ink, then? 1. I don't care where you post it, as long as I don't have to make an account or something to access it. 2. If there's a harem-y atmosphere, I'll probably dislike it and won't be able to offer much help. If you're still ok with that, choose Stone or Ink. Sameeeee! Totally...

I'm too lazy to shift through the AI stuff. I'll take a page out of Tempokai's book instead. https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/ask-me-stone-or-ink-for-feedback.23127/ Gimme your sacrifices novels here!

Comments as a reader are completely different from comments as a beta-reader... are you sure you want a review? :blob_hmm:

(Temporarily closed cuz I found I am bad with responsibility. Will try...to review the remaining novels but will likely forget. Only throw novel in here if you are ok with possibly getting a review after a month.) I'm not a professional, just a bored reader doing this for funsies! This is a...

Not the urge to say, but do. The urge to force the MC to eat a fetus, their still unborn sibling. Or make them sever their feet by stepping on a sharp knife. Or have them give up their chance to escape, to save their only supportive parental figure... who ends up dying anyway. Etc. It'll be a...

Yeah, that's why I said it's only bad when authors go overboard. Only the MC continuously knowing the right answers? While nobody else has sufficient knowledge? While the answer is often extremely simple? The authors themselves might think it's some complex, fancy genius MC stuff, but it is...

I'm reading these for the moment. Thanks so muchhhh! :blob_melt:

It was the synopsis and cover art. Just reading 'Damon Blackwell, a man who never wanted her', I assumed he was the ML. You know, a cold but hot ML who acts all nasty at first and hurts the MC, but later pines over her lmaooooo. Unwanted marriage spiraling into an emotional sadomasochist romance...

World Keeper was sadly a no from me, yep. I remember trying that long ago. And I do not watch DC or Marvel. As in, I know nothing. I know the names of the more popular superheroes, (I know that Batman and Superman exist?) but that's all. For the other works, I searched them up and they gimme...

I read this a longgg time ago, lmao. It's one of the reasons why I came here. The others were, Grandmaster's Weird Disciple, and Tree of Aeons? I think? Yeahhhh it's getting real nostalgic now, lmaooooooo. Ty for reminding me of this.