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Story ideas
What does the A stand for? Ah, I see. I still feel like no one would agree to fight him once he became reputable. Anyway, what would the plot be? Just him fighting people over and over again?- Wamba2K
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Story ideas
It sounds like someone should've been locked up if Zack is constantly killing people in his official fights. A few accidents might be able to be brushed off, but sooner or later people are gonna start raising their eyebrows.- Wamba2K
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I wonder what the texture of them is like. If it isn't that different, I could probably gaslight...
I wonder what the texture of them is like. If it isn't that different, I could probably gaslight myself into eating them- Wamba2K
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Writing high-stakes fight... Am I good at doing it?
Out of curiosity, what is the context of the entire fight?- Wamba2K
- Post #35
- Forum: Story Feedback
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Time just skipped forward an hour and I should probably go to bed...
Time just skipped forward an hour and I should probably go to bed...- Wamba2K
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Writing high-stakes fight... Am I good at doing it?
In my opinion, it feels flat. I have trouble keeping up with who's perspective the scene is supposed to be following, but that may be because its snipped out of a larger section. Beyond that: It feels unnecessarily explanatory. I think the sound effects are reductive (though that's a stylistic...- Wamba2K
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