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  1. MakBow

    Thoughts on the false religion I created (In my story)

    Well, are they really gullible if supernatural things do happen, just be done by the leader who causes these events using his supernatural powers to help them and frame it as the God doing it, all for the sake of his own power. (He's not a good person, of course) Most generic ones just have...
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    Thoughts on the false religion I created (In my story)

    So, in the mystery novel, I created this religion/cult for my mystery novel, and I want you to tell me what you think of it: The religions centers around Himvrael, a god that is nothing more than a fake god created for the mastermind to use it as a beacon for supernatural power and those who...
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    Damn bot notifications

    You ever just feel disappointed when you see that you have a message, thinking it may be a comment of someone who likes what you wrote, but when you open it, it's just a bot. Shiz's depressing
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    Bottlenecks of Mystery Novels

    Well, regardless of if it's hard for me, experience is key, so I'm prepared to mess up and this will be good practice for me since I've been getting better at slowing down recently when writing, able to make slow scenes not only about action and more about characters
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    Bottlenecks of Mystery Novels

    Well, at the start, it's him being more reckless as he holds no leads. it is only after a few things that I intend to have him solve other mysteries, especially since his past is directly connected to the church itself, which is connected to a majority of the mysterious in the city, so to...
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    Bottlenecks of Mystery Novels

    yeah, I certainly had that planned. I already outlined a lot of characters and their motivations. How the church is run by someone with supernatural powers, the black plague that infects the city being a result of outer beings and a giant cosmic mess, resulting in monsters roaming the streets...
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    Bottlenecks of Mystery Novels

    Only the first one and even then, that was when I was a kid, so I vaguely remember somethings. I did read PigPen which is a good amnesia manhwa Oh, and if you want to know my main inspirations: Bloodborne, Dark Souls, Elden Ring, LOTM, Hotel of Mythos (An abandoned idea I had revamped to the...
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    Bottlenecks of Mystery Novels

    It will be a sort of mystery of the city itself. For some context on the story: It is about my MC named Sunny, who awakens with no memories of his past life and very little understanding of the world and city he lives in called Blight Town, a steampunk city-state that is encased by walls of...
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    Bottlenecks of Mystery Novels

    Not much. I'm currently reading LOTM (Well, more so listening), I have watched Sherlock Homles, Get Out, Jigsaw if that counts, Nope, LongLegs, They Cloned Tyrone.
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    Bottlenecks of Mystery Novels

    I need some advice on how to write a good mystery novel. Since this is a new genre I'm tackling, I need to make know some of the things to keep in mind (Context: It will be a Mystery, Drama, Fantasy, Steampunk)
  11. MakBow

    Opening Scene

    How powerful or good do you think this opening scene is? Context SLAM! CRASH! In the room of a young lad who had begun to throw himself around his room, grabbing at his own face like an animal who had been infected by rabies, screaming in utter agony. “GIYYYAAAAAAAAAAAH!” He screamed, his shout...
  12. MakBow

    Power System Centered around Lovecraftian Gods

    Indeed, it was inspired by Lord of the Mysteries, but the basis was a completely different power system I scrapped before I even knew LOTM even existed. I just like mystery and used some aspects from its power system as well as a few others I have made in the past. Hell, even the setting is...
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    Power System Centered around Lovecraftian Gods

    So, I decided to create this power system for a mystery, steampunk, horror, fantasy story I intend to make since I want to tackle the mystery and horror genre I want to know if I set a good amount of limitations and versatility [Magic System: Arcana Card] Arcana Cards are divine artifacts that...
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    Introducing the boss

    I hope I did this right; I would like any feedback for me to change it: --- Using his shield, Soo would defend his team against every other arrow that came their way. Bennett used his shield to reflect them at the archers, who were suspended in the air because of Soo’s assault... STRIKE...
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    Story Feedback

    You read it, you know it: Level Up – To Break All Limits I Have | Scribble Hub Tell if you find it enjoyable to read and what you like or dislike
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    MC Villain who is the Übermensch

    He's certainly inspired as I have been reading reverend insanity for about 3 months now, but I didn't copy him, merely took some things I thought were interesting as I was trying to make a villain MC myself but needed some ideas on how to do so properly. Differences - did not start righteous...
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    MC Villain who is the Übermensch

    So, in my side novel that I write for more deep characters while I post my current, more surface level novel, I have this idea of my villain MC who I feel has a good basis for some peak writing, philosophical debates, etc. (Not that I think I'm good enough to execute them perfectly) He was a...
  18. MakBow

    So, I made this and I won't lie, it sounds tuff

    Basically, yeah
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    So, I made this and I won't lie, it sounds tuff

    No, there is still a tribulation, it just doesn't come in the form of lighting always and it's not there to test you but outright kill you since the heavens don't want people to cultivate. The heavenly assassin as you call it is merely there to stop people from becoming true immortals once they...
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    So, I made this and I won't lie, it sounds tuff

    No, it has nothing to do with lightning
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