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  1. greyblob

    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    meh its still there. you underestimate my lethargy
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    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    @Bimbanana review is up but got merged
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    What are SH writers reading?

    I ran out of novels man. nothing on RR and nothing published. it's a shit show. fantasy is doomed
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    @Rosica can you drop a quick commrnt in the thread my post got merged

    @Rosica can you drop a quick commrnt in the thread my post got merged
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    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    you can do whatever you'd like i dont mind read up to: Chapter 6: Roll and Action! (Part 2) I like the premise. i like the antihero trope a lot so i was excited to see this would go then i was disappointed when 180 years were skipped. wanted to read the zero to hero experience but it is what...
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    >A voice like splitting thunder from a clear sky >each one a swirling vortex of energy dark...

    >A voice like splitting thunder from a clear sky >each one a swirling vortex of energy dark enough to eclipse the sun >The malice of a thousand years felt heavier than the mountain air >Space shrieked as her claws, sharp enough to tear divine iron >The sphere of apocalyptic energy
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    not sensory no. youre really twisting my hand. i have to bring up examples and im too lazy

    not sensory no. youre really twisting my hand. i have to bring up examples and im too lazy
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    its a particular flavor of descriptions/prose

    its a particular flavor of descriptions/prose
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    hmm no

    hmm no
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    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    its alright i treat all of the clones as a single hivemind. as far as im concerned, they asked for the review together
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    I dont know if it's ai and i dont really care frankly. all i know is that it has patterns...

    I dont know if it's ai and i dont really care frankly. all i know is that it has patterns similar to how ai 'types'. that's about it
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    i am not accusing you. I know it. You can fool them but you cant fool me

    i am not accusing you. I know it. You can fool them but you cant fool me
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    and why is that term a thing now

    and why is that term a thing now
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    meh i dont care

    meh i dont care
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  15. greyblob

    whose clone is this

    whose clone is this
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  16. greyblob

    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    not much of a feedback but im known to be generous (humble) is the link with us in the room?
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    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    forgot to mention that i liked the intro. the character unlocking her memories from the cinema to the accident. great overall. main thing that kept me reading honestly
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    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    is it starter beast? I dont remeber honestly. there's a 10k min because 2 chapters are not enough to make a review. i read them but dont have much to offer. I can tell what youre trying to convey but your grasp on the language berays you. my advice to you is to read more and write more and try...
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    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    shes screwing you over. its her and her clones gang
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    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    read up to: Chapter 8: Generational Talent writing quality is decent. very translation-esque. but has an ai-smell about it. I suspect you're using ai to edit or polish which i dont really have much of an opinion on. It's not glaringly so. only the first chapter suffers from this otherwise its...
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