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7/20 jew 13/20 hobogoblin no its weird because you have 2 parents and 2 grandparents and this has to be a fraction of 2. 1/2 1/4 etc or maybe this was patched i dunno

its just the 7/20. very odd fraction lol

yeah i can tell bro. ai cover or just stealing a random nerd jp girl will work. boobs will ironically be a bad cover for your novel. despicable. will probably have more readers but despicable regardless. for thr multiple povs, i do not enjoy them at all. the max amount of charctaers i...

read up to: 30. Warning: Consequences this is gonna be a short one because i honestly don't have much to critique. overall, the writing is solid. structure is good, characters feel distinct. this is not my cup of tea but the writing is easy to read so i just kept reading and was honestly...

I just realized. you stole my trademark

its been two years since the last one and two more since the one before. im getting the itch again. i'll provide a simple review of what i read. I try to read more than the first few chapters before voicing an opinion which is why i have these few rules 1. No BL or GB or Smut. GL is fine but I...

How is someone 7/20 black? how do we reach this fraction? this is not my cup of tea so i skimmed through the first 3 chapters. the writing quality is good but the writing itself is lacking. it lacks substance. the chapters i read suffer from a case of telling and not showing. you're telling me...

i'm not an english native either. for edits, the best advice i can give is read published novels. find a genre you like, download some books and read them. your writing will change drastically without you realizing it. for more concious work, its about patterns imo. you observe patterns and you...

wouldnt call this editing tbh. moreso rewriting. ai-assistance first draft has flaws but 2nd and 3rd change the feel completely. it went from silly to pretentious. Id say it elevated the the writing level, better composition, better vocab, yada yada but at the same time, it made it more...

did you read orconomics?