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  1. Wenlock

    "One of the cruelest diminutions in life is allowing a brilliant mind to become a slave to a...

    "One of the cruelest diminutions in life is allowing a brilliant mind to become a slave to a lazy body, one that prioritizes rest before it is even tired." -Buya Hamka
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    The Most Valuable Thing in the Room...

    Gold I guess. I have a few gold articles in this room.
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    Recommendations Anyone have a book I can get hyped for?

    Hey! Satanic Verses is pretty cool. Also my own book if you're interested.
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    What little details irks you when reading?

    In short, second hand embarrassment. Anything that gives me that god awful feeling when I am reading to get away from such crap. Stop giving me imaginary stress.
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    Chain Story

    Richard's body froze with shock, their childish voices producing a tremor in his hands. "How- how do you know... " He turns to them with widened eyes, "...my real identity?" The gaggle of children cease their tantrum when they realize that Richard, no, Adolf Hitler seemed to be a bit out of it.
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    Trolley problem. Just that.

    Assuming that I don't know anyone on both tracks, for me it's more like, "I don't see no lever." Because I don't want to take the responsibility of changing anyone's fate. Like maybe that one guy over there was lucky enough to be there meanwhile the the 5 on the other track, the train is already...
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    What is the premise of your story in a prompt that readers can understand your story?

    [Zhang Xiyu, a dead scholar and official in the royal court of late 17th century, is now a "chosen one" of the Blue Lotus in Hell ] + [Lord Enma ignoring his duties which led the demons to torture and eat mortal souls while his 3 sons aim to take his throne as King of Hell.] + [Hidden goals +...
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    [daily] taking out the trash

    Vaccumed the sofas and chairs, did some minor repairs in the house, went to the dentist, followed up on some important documents I need, got some groceries, attended class, cleaned my windows, did some after class studying and now here I am at midnight. Goodnight guys
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    Here is a fun one

    Monocles
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    I need some help coming up with ideas for a cover of my novel (Nevermind, no more help needed. Thank You!)

    Just have the cat girl bridal carry the farmer, who is hugging a shovel. Make him look bewildered and her mischievous. Put a cat somewhere on the ground. Just throwing out suggestions
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    Secrets of the one above game

    The one above me gives people tattoos on their buttcheeks
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    What are you most hated novels, why?

    Mirai Nikki / Future Diaries. Not gonna elaborate.
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    Battery anxiety

    What percentage range of battery are you happy to have you device sit at? 80 What percentage of battery do you start to feel a bit anxious? 60 What percentage of battery do you actively find a way to charge? 40 What percentage of battery have you almost never seen your device at? 2
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    What do you think about Loli?

    I don't care for lolis. As long as they are not sexualised, I will watch it. One good character is that loli teacher from hunter x hunter so the contrast between her appearance and yankee personality was really funny. I also like them when they are there to scare the shit out of you.
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    Which do you prefer, first-person POV or third-person POV in fictional narratives?

    First person only works if the main character has many complex emotions that cannot be conveyed through third person pov. It could be yearning, terror or rage. Or sometimes they can just be eccentric to the point where if I weren't reading the first pov, I wouldn't have guessed wtf they were...
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    I'm on a once in a while, criticism spree

    Thanks for the elaborate feedback. I did have a feeling that the Synopsis isn't 'hooking' enough. Like you said, Ava seems to be a setup device... because she is. The story doesn't care about her at all. She is in other words a 'canon fodder' but there's a reason why her soul go devoured and...
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    I'm on a once in a while, criticism spree

    Hey. This is my first book ever and I would really appreciate a feedback. The book is in my signature.
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    Ikr. And then they continue to think that things are just the same as it was in their era and...

    Ikr. And then they continue to think that things are just the same as it was in their era and don't understand your worries for the future generation. You just can't make them understand the gravity of the situation.
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    Literally reading a story right now where MC 'god' kills his 'god' father at the end.

    Literally reading a story right now where MC 'god' kills his 'god' father at the end.
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    What would your death row meal be?

    Some sizzler platter. Pizza. Definitely need ice cream to get through this. Also ramen and chocolates. It's going to be childish and large in calories. And don't worry I will puke it out while I die.
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