So while I'm witnessing the start of the third world war (hoping it's a bad joke), I just finished coloring this. OyasumiSe7en V3 Character Intro.
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So while I'm witnessing the start of the third world war (hoping it's a bad joke), I just finished coloring this. OyasumiSe7en V3 Character Intro.
This post is merely to inform, not to offend. I just want to say, not every post out there showing something (i.e. drawing, chapter) is looking for feedback.
Look for questions. If the OP has one, then they are looking for feedback. If none, then just enjoy what you see.
V3 Character Intro, inked!
Ngl, night drives are fun.
My co-workers are in some hotel for three days for a seminar, and team-building as well.
I'm here at home, doing things I love.
We're both happy.
Final word count for OyasumiSe7en V3. Switching to drawing.
What kind of coffee do you like?
Let me tell you that as of 5:01 pm, 27th day of February, 2026, I already finished the 3rd Volume manuscript of my ongoing novel, OyasumiSe7en.
Thank you for the peeps that helped me with ideas, and struggled with me until I finished this.
Ayt. That's it. Imma add another to my ignore list.
Fking hell, I choose peace over arguing with peeps.
Court work is exhausting, especially if the minutes are 15 damn pages long now.
I talked to my fellow co-teachers about my condition (my subject coordinator, and two of my trusted colleagues) because I really am avoiding human interaction earlier.
Good thing they understood. The torrent of suicidal thoughts also mellowed and eventually disappeared. I'm hoping the worst had come to pass.
As fore methodology, I had multiple rewrites over the years. Some extensive. Some less extensive. Some mostly graphical. But, yes, one major one was when I shaved a lot of words which were superfluous (35 - 40%) thanks to the influence of @JayDirex . I also reduced the word count per chapter. The lesson was, the words are how many there need to be.
Now as for rewriting itself, yes, do not be afraid of it. Your first chapters are essentially your business card. The better they are, the more will stick out with you. Readers have no patience. Getting better later on will never be rewarded. You either have them hooked or lose them.
Let’s start with the reaction part. Generally, readers do not react. Firstly, because they would never notice a rewrite of earlier chapters unless you do a complete retcon. Secondly, because readers who reread your works periodically are exceedingly rare to the point of being negligible. I have some of them, but as said, they are rare.
I love boneless fried chicken when it is juicy and tender.
And don't worry. I have no class as of the moment.
The Office of Supreme SHF Court Clerk is open anytime so file your cases now.
It is a different matter, however, the receipt of your cases because I'm not 24 hours awake.
thanks for helping me fix my writing format...
Guys, if you have a spare time, please pray for me. I'm having difficilty in battling my psycho-emotional condition right now, and I admit I'm being tormented by thoughts of suicide again.
Already talked to my psych about this. Don't worry, I'm standing my ground. Just that, a little help will do. Thanks!
31k words before I conduct class. And two-three chapters away from completing my 3rd book's manuscript.
Just realized I need a referral code to join Vgen. I'm lazy to join their events. I'm wary of joining Discord channels. And I know no one who works in Vgen.
So I guess, I'll take up commission requests the old-fashioned way. -
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