Rhaps

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  Rhaps

• Jan 18, 2024

For any manhwa readers, you must've noticed that most MCs slowly begin to wear a black ir white trench coat at some point in the story.

Someone had called this the dokjafication, like carcification (evolve into crab).

Am I hallucinating because I see it.

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  Rhaps

• Jan 17, 2024

I checked my insight for fun, I saw that I have one Israeli reader and I was like "bro wtf are you doing, there is a war going on."

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  Assurbanipal_II

• Jan 16, 2024

Followed some of your suggestions and rewrote. Writing a demon is not easy.

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  Conqueror_Quack

• Jan 16, 2024

I 'Herd' That you liked Organs so here is one.

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  Rhaps

• Jan 16, 2024

It came to me in a dream, the ancestor of the Uzumaki is none other than Yujiro Hanma.

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  Rhaps

• Jan 16, 2024

Today the Zen monastery I visited for a uni assignment put on rave music, while monks doing a podcast on the side of the road.

I can't even make this shit up.

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  Rhaps

• Jan 15, 2024

People say economic is boring, but I enjoy it very much.

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  Rhaps

• Jan 14, 2024

Today I learned the power of a Karen.

My cousin got pissed after the Popeyes got the wrong order, and was rude about it. So she called the headquarters, got an additional meal for free.

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  Rhaps

• Jan 13, 2024

This is one of the main antagonists of my story. The Progenitor is one of his title

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  Assurbanipal_II

• Jan 13, 2024

I think you don't need much help. You writing is pleasant to my eyes. I don't feel the need to skip like usually, which means you can hold my attention. It is structured. Sufficiently clear. The only thing you need to feat are narrative shortfalls, rather than technical ones. I wish your story good luck.

Rating 4.4 ... Seems unfairly low.

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  Assurbanipal_II

• Jan 13, 2024

Your narrated time is pleasant to read.

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  Assurbanipal_II

• Jan 13, 2024

Just saying black font in dark mode is hard to read.

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  Assurbanipal_II

• Jan 13, 2024

In an empty white room, which seemed to expand to infinity. A lone girl sat there staring blankly at the far distance land without an end.

White, white, white as far as her eyes reached. To the horizon and beyond, her world was painted white, engulfed in nothing but unrelenting, pouring light.

How curious. Mine and your beginning.

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  Assurbanipal_II

• Jan 13, 2024

If you are writing isekai, the escapism aspect shouldn't be too apparent. It greatly helps your story.

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  Assurbanipal_II

• Jan 13, 2024

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  Rhaps

• Jan 13, 2024

Today I made cheese, which type of cheese I have no clue. Its crumbly and that's all I know.

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  Rhaps

• Jan 12, 2024

Rhapsody confession s2
#6

I used to play League, but I quit 5 years ago.

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  Rhaps

• Jan 11, 2024

So, I tried to give my MC short hair, she hit different

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  Rhaps

• Jan 10, 2024

Rhapsody confession s2
#5

One of the thing that stressed me out recently was helping organize for a wedding.

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  Rhaps

• Jan 10, 2024

Being empathically challenged, I'm immuned to being rizzed up.