Back in high school, the class president was a drug dealer. Not the same group as me, since I'm just a delivery guy.
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One of the most uderrated tokusatsu is Golden Knight Garo
I just noticed that you are also in the Naruto fanfic club.
Thank you for your encouraging words.
For any manhwa readers, you must've noticed that most MCs slowly begin to wear a black ir white trench coat at some point in the story.
Someone had called this the dokjafication, like carcification (evolve into crab).
Am I hallucinating because I see it.
I checked my insight for fun, I saw that I have one Israeli reader and I was like "bro wtf are you doing, there is a war going on."
Followed some of your suggestions and rewrote. Writing a demon is not easy.
I 'Herd' That you liked Organs so here is one.
It came to me in a dream, the ancestor of the Uzumaki is none other than Yujiro Hanma.
Today the Zen monastery I visited for a uni assignment put on rave music, while monks doing a podcast on the side of the road.
I can't even make this shit up.
People say economic is boring, but I enjoy it very much.
Today I learned the power of a Karen.
My cousin got pissed after the Popeyes got the wrong order, and was rude about it. So she called the headquarters, got an additional meal for free.
This is one of the main antagonists of my story. The Progenitor is one of his title
I think you don't need much help. You writing is pleasant to my eyes. I don't feel the need to skip like usually, which means you can hold my attention. It is structured. Sufficiently clear. The only thing you need to feat are narrative shortfalls, rather than technical ones. I wish your story good luck.
Rating 4.4 ... Seems unfairly low.
Your narrated time is pleasant to read.
Just saying black font in dark mode is hard to read.
In an empty white room, which seemed to expand to infinity. A lone girl sat there staring blankly at the far distance land without an end.
White, white, white as far as her eyes reached. To the horizon and beyond, her world was painted white, engulfed in nothing but unrelenting, pouring light.
How curious. Mine and your beginning.
If you are writing isekai, the escapism aspect shouldn't be too apparent. It greatly helps your story.
Today I made cheese, which type of cheese I have no clue. Its crumbly and that's all I know. -
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