ElijahRyne

ElijahRyne

A Hermit that’s NOT that Lazy, currentlycomplainen 24 From My teacher is on a research base near the
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    I think outside of a grammar checker, or having a friend look at it, the best free recourse for editing is a screen reader. That way you can hear your story and catch awkward phrasing and the like. Of course you can read it aloud yourself, but for longer works, that is more work than necessary imo.
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    AI ‘enhanced’ writing is such a slog to get through. It treats every moment as a 11 yet its descriptions and prose are quite average. Every moment is the most important moment a sentence becomes twice as long, or multiple sentences. With frivolous ornamentation that make its writing seem purple if not for how bland its prose is.
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    To be honest, I,Robot movie strangely but interestingly talk accurately about "creation" well.

    You can see Sonny draw a perfect drawing so easily. Perfect replica.
    But thing is, human creations, like humans themselves, are flawed.
    And interestingly, just like Milo statue prove, is that sometimes imperfection is more attractive than perfection.
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    Just like its jarring if someone introduce their MC as the perfect guy.

    And why Saitama and Goku have weird flaws.

    Pretty sure lot of people (me included) find detestable how Goku can be dumb at times (like sparring his enemies), or Saitama not telling he was the one that killed this or this monster (and could solve his money problem) and also being so focused on trying to spare money (supermarket discount).
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    But that is why they are liked.

    Because they are imperfect.
    If saitama, was perfect, handsome, sweet-talking, got girls like Sweet mask, rich while still strong.

    People would find jarring. Because not-human-like.


    > To return to topic. Humans can recognize when things are not human-like.
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    It is hard to compare playing Go to playing Chess, but I will try. In traditional go theory the opening is broken down into three parts corner side and center. Keep this in mind.

    The first move in a corner has 8-12 moves that you can play to get an equal to somewhat equal result. In chess there are 16 such moves as the first move. Each joseki gives an equal result similar to each chess opening.
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    Unlike chess there are typically 4 of these ‘openings’ each game in go. With each ‘opening‘ effecting eachother. In general a game of Go gets simpler as you play, and a game of Chess more complex. So when the mid game starts the games become incomparable until the end game, where we can say that endgames of both games can be solved.
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    Hot take, war is bad. It is just working folk of one nation killing working folk of other nations to enrich and/or make more powerful the already rich and powerful. The only just side in a war is when one nation has been invaded/occupied and its people decide to fight back/liberate itself. At least imo.
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    This is just mid, imo. Wonder why it is my liked playlist? Probably just me putting in an ost I like without going through every song to double check. The instrumentals are somewhat standout perhaps if I had to choose what the song is good at.
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    What song does Elijah think is mid?

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    Do you not see the Spotify snippet? I can post the link:
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    I am surprised that some teenager stole hundreds of thousands worth of things, 4 planes, and evaded capture in the U.S. for a few years. Teaching himself how to fly while on the run. Only to be caught in the Bahamas, after provoking someone to chase him while stealing a boat. I am more surprised that I first learned of this today.
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