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AliceMoonvale
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I like that mask-nya. May I still it?
My zombie survival diary story has officially one irl kill count.
I obtained a quality reader on RR at random who enjoyed my work, had similar interests, etc. Lot of comments and all that. I check back and suddenly their account got deleted. Very sadge, very tragic. My day is ruined and my disappointment is immeasurable
I like stories that aren't committing the three P's of atrocities. The dreaded Pee Pee Pee, if you will.
Purple. Pretentious. Problematic.
Moon Orchard Log Entry #6:
Cloud trees have been observed releasing highly volatile pollen into the orchard while simultaneously announcing, through high-frequency signals beyond the range of human hearing, that the pollen may be dangerous.
The warnings do not prevent the dispersal.
Purpose of this behavior remains unclear.
Since I’m apparently one of your favs, I’ll let you know that I think your work is one of the best I’ve reviewed and the only one I’ve read all the way to the latest chapter.
Glad you didn’t let those 1* get to you.
Moon Orchard Log Entry #5:
Cloud trees have developed a new coping mechanism for distress: marking nearby fruit from other trees with strange symbols believed to denote ripeness levels.
The markings appear to have little effect on the fruit itself, but seem to provide temporary emotional relief to the trees responsible.
Further observation is required.You, mask moon woman, who are you and why did my girl let you in the same art pic?
Awe, after a previous shit-filled day and another fun hospital visit, I get something nice 'n wholesome when I wake up today.
My zombie diary story gets recommended for the first time, in a thread for zombie stories, then the OP reads and leaves a review after reading all current chapters.
Moon Orchard Log Entry #4
A once speculated behavior among cloud trees has now been confirmed.
Trees once known for loudly battling invasive weeds appear unsettled when none remain. Lacking clear threats, the tree grows creeping vines that begin tightening around its own nearby fruit, or the fruit of neighboring trees, damaging them.
The tree likely believes it is defending the orchard.
Moon Orchard Log Entry #3:
Fruit grown from the cloud trees display a tendency to produce prolonged vocalizations when distressed. The sounds are consistent and appear to echo across nearby branches, persisting despite no visible threat. Nearby fruit continue growing.
I remain unsure whether this behavior serves a survival purpose or is the fruit's way of drawing attention to itself in order to be picked.
Moon Orchard Log Entry #2:
Observation reveals that fruit produced by cloud banana trees display unusually strong reactions when presented with various facial expressions. Specimens exposed to more dynamic emotions appear to enter a state of acute distress, resulting in either suspended growth or falling prematurely from the branch, as if experiencing hostile weather conditions.
Additional study is required.
Moon Orchard Log Entry #1:
Fascinating phenomenon observed in the Orchard today!
Certain cloud trees practice a rare technique known as selective growing,
picking exactly one-third of branches to grow from, then insists fruit grew from the entire tree.
I will keep logs of future findings. -
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