Somewhat reworked CH 2 to have more action, still needs more work. So does CH 1, but it is good enough for me to continue to ch 4+ for now. Am mostly happy with the prologue, however I can see if the grandfather’s monologue is too flowery I understand where you are coming from, but that is the point imo. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-qpLyHm5HVoxOLvIau4VTUO2fDIM4N-hznKwaShjhKI/edit?usp=drivesdk
