The writing format isn't to my taste, but aside from that and a few minor spelling errors, everything is good.
And my favorite part, accidentially unleash evil upon the world, the lead up was amazing and I can feel the dominos starting to fall. The action is good, show both sides their perk such as overwhelming power or skills. Though there is one major gripe I have, the demon doesn't have much personality.

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