Question: How do I don't run on?
My story writing is full of "as" and "while" with an unhealthy amount of commas, even more so when I am not dialogue focused.
My presentation speeches, according to my boss, is atrocious and I am a laughing stock. I look more like an overconfident clown who beats around the bush.
So yeah, any advice on either if not both?
My story writing is full of "as" and "while" with an unhealthy amount of commas, even more so when I am not dialogue focused.
My presentation speeches, according to my boss, is atrocious and I am a laughing stock. I look more like an overconfident clown who beats around the bush.
So yeah, any advice on either if not both?

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