I just ran a whole bunch of statistics for my writing against professional samples.
Two takeaways (statistically relevant averages):
Only use additional words before your noun phrase and verb (SV) in scene setting. If things are actually going on, you should be averaging about 1 word before the SV a sentence.
but if you really don't want your past work getting revealed to the world you can try archiving on a different site like AO3 or FanFiction and leave a link where people can read your past work
that way you can get it out of the way AND not have your embarrassing stories be put out in the wide world for all 2 see