I Need Your Feedback and Validation Pweasee

Sooo....
This is my second novel. This time i try to be a bit more... conventional. I think.

So anyway, here's the link. Please let me know if its enjoyable or not

The Necromancer Who Can't Raise The Dead


Oh hi @SouthernMaiden and @sleepandeatallday
Would you like to take a quick look?

*prepares tea and snack*