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That's all I wanted to hear! Thank you very much! And thanks to everybody who bothered with this story, and thanks alot!

Alright this is An unfinished chapter. Here, I fixed some stuff and some grammar errors. Sorry for troubling you. Black, All I see is black and emptiness, but not so long as I got to see my hands and the other rest of my body. Saying that I was confused and scared is an understatement...

I will edit it again then

I just want an honest opinion I admit that I am not good this is my first time putting some effort into this. And if it's bad, does it look passable in your opinion? Black, All I see is black and emptiness, but not so long as I got to see my hands and the other rest of my body. Saying that I...

Thanks! Then I will use "I was a 7-year-old kid back then."

Do we say 1-Zach is 7-years-old or 2- Zach is 7 years old