Recent content by Whitephantom

genshin paved the way for new gen gacha's to have 50/50 pity, which I hate. Comparing a pvp orientated gacha like Epic Seven, with both art, compelling gameplay and the horrible embedded 15% and other...rng...Mihoyo basically appeals to the masses and basically started the pve gaming with the...

I had her in my hands yesterday, that warmth is never felt again... only the blood could be remembered

I’m quite interested in this, could spark something good from it

really like the scenery in this tbh

Alluria And just to add more for the eyes

i write sad stories shooot, to me it can add in emotional temperament towards characters and the story

Like what he could do is have the mc before switching to another body tell the current body he’s in now to fight fight fight until let’s say die. And that body without a “soul” would still have a “will”. To further explain its like a snake’s head gets chopped off and the rest of the body...

Ahh so basically wat i said but way way smaller in detail and depth? Which makes sense

What you could do is envision a 2-5yr old eating at the table, since they know no better they would smear food around there area, they would have food around there face, hair even there body. They would take bad table manners to the upmost limits basically lmao. Smacking loudly in ur ears...

Thanks! I’ll note these down to form a basis on my character The novel itself

ahhhhh ok, i thought what i was doing before was more ¨noob like¨ because i was keeping each speaker separate before, was trying something new in the edits, which i will note down not to do. And i used the brackets since using ---> : <--- didnt really look right to me visual wise, and besides...

yeah ill be working on fixing it, but i was going that route where she would draw attention to herself kinda using the past event as a crutch oh and can you tell me what exactly it was that u couldn't understand? (hopefully nothin major)

yea it did, ill post the part im on in the title then

yea so my problem is writing a narcissist character, not so much foreshadowing. Like how they act around other people, what they do in this said situation compared to a normal person, how they reply and react to certain things if that makes sense. So for the character in question I’m lightly...

i tried and it was a great show to watch again, still couldnt relate it to my character for dialogue use tho