Recent content by VKnives

I actually love RPG systems and use Pathfinder 2e heavily for reference and balance for things in my setting, but some generic LitRPG systems I've seen for the genre are overly restrictive or needless. I also loved SAO when I was younger, but most systems are really plot devices for the main...

Here is my story! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1891707/the-witch-and-the-rogue This is not broken into chapters, only scene breaks, and there's no webnovel formatting. It's just written as a continuous novel. I think the beginning is the weakest part, so I hope it can still keep a...

Thank you for any time you have to review my work! This is written as a 95k word romantasy novel, I have no experience with web formatting, and there are no chapter ends, just scene breaks. You can just stop reading as soon as you lose interest rather than counting scenes or anything. It would...

I want to play along but I can't think of which genre I hate the most! Looking at the list it's probably sports, as a full genre. I don't want to consider gender bender as a genre, that is odd. I would make the sports series about the intense specific training and psychological toll on the...

I tried my best to create a romantasy with the focus on psychological and tactical realism in a fantasy RPG style setting. I feel the storyline is less predictable and the relationship is believable in the sense that they like each other for more reasons than being "the two attractive named...

Evil/villain protagonist: I love and relate to ruthless characters because it's more believable and even educational when the characters "win" because of ruthless action. I like when they are shown as cunning and powerful because they do whatever is necessary, rather than because the plot...

Sorry it came across that way, I only expected to see when you lost interest.

Hi! Here is my romantic fantasy novel, I'm grateful for critiques. It does not have chapters, and the cover is just art of the protagonist until the cover is finished. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1891707/the-witch-and-the-rogue

Hi! I'm grateful for any feedback on my novel. It doesn't have chapters, and the "cover" is just art of the protagonist atm. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1891707/the-witch-and-the-rogue