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    Requesting Feedback, Critisim, Reviews, and what have you for my first writing..

    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I am unsure what sentence structure even is, but it seems to be something I need to look into more as well as the tensing. For the chapters I do see what you mean, it is very abrupt. I have a lot of ideas and want to get to them swiftly instead...
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    When did you start writing?

    According to my first draft on google docs, January 10th 2026 was the first time I wrote anything meaningful.
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    Requesting Feedback, Critisim, Reviews, and what have you for my first writing..

    Thank you for the kind words, I was very conscious on the flow rewriting like mad to make it make sense. If you eve do decide to dive back in I'd love to hear your thoughts but until then thank you for the motivational boost :)
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    Requesting Feedback, Critisim, Reviews, and what have you for my first writing..

    Thank you for your words! I am truly happy knowing my work impacted you so. I am excited for you to follow her journey as well. The next chapter will be out soon. Once more thank you for reading :)
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    I'm not sure as I have never had writing to critique nor the chance to critique others. Perhaps...

    I'm not sure as I have never had writing to critique nor the chance to critique others. Perhaps I am looking for if my novel is readable, enjoyable, or if the reader could understand and feel immersed in the writing?
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    Is there anywhere else a cig smoking cat can get feedback to their novel?

    Is there anywhere else a cig smoking cat can get feedback to their novel?
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    What’s a sentence you wish someone would write about you?

    "I looked forward to his work each week. It made my days just that much more bearable."
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    Requesting Feedback, Critisim, Reviews, and what have you for my first writing..

    Hello, Like many here I too am a first time writer. I have never written anything before. I also don't have much of an education so please bear with my grammar, formatting and punctuation. I did have a friend read over a few lines, however she had gotten busy around chapter 3 and the God...
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    Ideal length for chapters

    That is a valid point, i did not think of mobile readers losing their spot. Thank you for that insight.
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    Ideal length for chapters

    I was wondering about chapter length. so far With just , chapter 1, 2, 3 and not even finished with 4 I am already averaging 3k+ words a chapter according to my google docs. I am wondering if it would be ideal to split the chapters in half and post them that way. In an attempt to keep retention...
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    What is your story ACTUALLY about

    There is a price for everything. Even good deeds and intentions.
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    Chain Story

    For they too witnessed the appendix be slain.
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    Cat Supremacy Thread

    Lemme post a selfie.
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    Finding a better idea once writing is ready nearly done.

    I wanted to ask you folk if you have had similar moments. I noticed I will write and get my chapter ready to publish, only to proofread it and think "actually this would go so much better here and this would work better if i did x y z" and then scrap the chapter keeping bits and pieces from the...
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    Beast Heroes: What Animal are you?

    A cat smoking a cigarette.
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