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In canon before the novel even started, V's "parents" died in a car crash and on his birthday of '97. He saw a woman kill herself. Each of those two events happens in the same month. V was both 17 and 18. Then he became a drunk and smoked for ten years. He also dead and killed lots. Then he saw...

Because the main character was a chain smoker and his voice sounded like shit and his mind followed suit with his same grimy voice.

I would be thankful for your time. Link: The Devil’s Hell | Scribble Hub

What's the point at that point? Also, you aren't really creating something; you're editing. It's editing nothing more than stolen writing and Reddit posts. Each their own so they say, but it not your writing. And only a year isn't much. Writing is like any skill; it takes time to get better...

Wow, this was amazing, thanks. I never liked dialogue tags in the beginning, but I've been using them more in current writing, so I'll give this chapter another chapter. (I think this must be the 5th draft at this point.) On Royal Road it's almost the book's first anniversary, and I've been...

I always like getting another opinion upon my odd hobby. Link:The Devil’s Hell | Scribble Hub. Thanks in advance and thanks if you get to it. Have a good one.

I'll throw my hat as always. The Devil’s Hell | Scribble Hub. Thanks for your time if you read.

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I don't think this is going to get a word at all. The Devil’s Hell | Scribble Hub. If it does, thanks for spending your time on it.

I did the genre thing on purpose, and also the Tokyo thing is explained later on, kind of. I've never been a fan of dialogue tags, but I look over to make sure it's understandable. Also grammatical mistakes are always my worst enemy, so thanks for bringing up that there's more I gotta find...

I would be happy if you had a look at my novel book thing. The Devil’s Hell | Scribble Hub. What inspired me to write the tale was originally pure insanity. I was reading so many isekai webtoons/manhwa that I went mad because the main characters never act in the way I thought I would act. Also...

Chapter four is kind of a horror-feeling chapter, and The Devils Madness arc is kind of horror at points. Probably isn't the right book but hey may has well give it a shot. The Devil’s Hell | Scribble Hub

Yeah, probably contact that person.

Thanks man, and don't worry; it's not that heartbreaking. Scribble Hub is only one of the websites my tale is on; the main website I actually like is Royal Roads. But yeah, I'll delete the extra space and most likely add a "I said" and "Steve said." Thanks for using your time to give some advice...

Damn, the size of the gaps between the diagonals on the Google Doc is much smaller. That's bloody annoying. Well, thanks for your time.