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Hello, six chapters of my novel have been published so far. I'd love to hear your opinions on them, guys. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1645348/heavenly-demon-ascending/

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I am interested in your opinion too. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1326026/rise-of-the-demonic-emperor-absolute-domination/

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Why is the beginning so general? It is true that incarnation is general to everyone, but incarnation in a novel you are reading, and in addition to that, as the hero of the novel, it is not general, I think. Even when incarnated in a novel that you know in other stories, he is often like the...

Here is the beginning of my first chapter that I edited. Give me your opinions on it, and how much you think I should make Lin Fan take the time to Assimilate, since I don't know how to edit the text to make it fit the context. I want honest opinions. Chapter 1: In the Forest of Magical...

I made the protagonist reincarnate into his favorite novel as the hero of the story, but he will follow a completely different path. He will be very evil, not just a selfish person concerned with his own interests, but someone who will do anything, without caring about morals, to get what he...

Here are some amendments to the first chapter, for those who want to give me their opinion on them, whether they are better, and how I can improve them further. Chapter 1: In the Forest of Magical Beasts, deep inside a small, dark cave, a young man with messy black hair and a handsome face...

I understand, but it's hard to wait a long time. I'm excited to edit this so it's better, as this novel is not only a future source of money for me, but I'm having fun writing it, and I really like the feeling of constantly improving at the thing I love. Therefore, I hope that I have not...

Well I will try to work this